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My poem

Posted Nov 7, '09 at 6:12pm

BGames

BGames

8 posts

Wood - Squire

I was in L.A. (language arts) class when I just thought of a short little poem

A gun
what a wast
it blew up
in my face.

Posted Nov 7, '09 at 7:01pm

TerryLasVegas

TerryLasVegas

304 posts

Gold - Knight

Thats it? lol I think you should expand on it.

 

Posted Nov 8, '09 at 4:28pm

BGames

BGames

8 posts

Wood - Squire

A gun what a wast
It blew up in my face

There was a terrible hospital bill
The money I had left was nil

I needed money to pay the rent
I wound up sleeping in a tent

I decided to go into a life of crime
I earned nothing but a dime

I went to jail
Tried to break out in rain and hail

I stole the security guard's gun
I finished him and now he is done

I shot the gun again, it jammed

A gun what a waste
It blew up in my face

NEVER USE A GUN

I hope you guys and gals like it.

 

Posted Nov 9, '09 at 10:26pm

Google567

Google567

1,351 posts

Gold - Prince

Pretty good.

 

Posted Nov 9, '09 at 10:48pm

Zephera

Zephera

152 posts

Gold - Serf

Strange indeed, though the lyrics are almost genius. (Jokingly Sarcastic)

Ha, it was funny, but the flow wasn't all that great. lol

 
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