ForumsArt, Music, and WritingTanka Contest Theme: Miracles Pg 19. Due: 29th

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MoonFairy
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As most of us know, the last Tanka Contest died. This is the new Tanka Contest! Ta-daaaaa!

Tanka consists of five units (often treated as separate lines when Romanized or translated) usually with the following mora pattern:
5-7-5-7-7.
The 5-7-5 is called the kami-no-ku ("upper phrase&quot, and the 7-7 is called the shimo-no-ku ("lower phrase&quot. Tanka is a much older form of Japanese poetry than haiku.

Rules
1) Must be original. NO PLAGARIZING ALLOWED!
2) Has to fit the Theme.
3) Submition deadline will be inforced.
4) Only one submission per user
5) The winner cannot win twice in a row.
6) The Tanka MUST be created for this contest.

Easy enough? And If you are questioning Rule #5, it is because some people may be Beastly at any type of poetry and have really good submissions every week, and I am sure that you would want to win too right? See? Fairness makes the world go round. (not really) And if you are questioning Rule #6, it is on here because if you made something beforehand, that is giving you a better chance at winning, and it isn't fair to the other participants *if any)
The Frist Theme is......
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Music! Deadline is the May 29th, 2010 Judging will be Either the 30th or 31st.

Also, Me and Thepossum will be the judges. I am the first judge, Next week will be possums. Good Luck to all!

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nichodemus
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@Jeol

The Heavens have a weird way of dictating how our topics are all of such characteristics!

44Flames
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God comes from the clouds.
He comes down shining brightly.
Then lifts holy arms.
And parts the great red sea.
With the Jews amazed by this.


Took me a long time but I did it.

Maverick4
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What signs must I give?
You refuse to listen, yet
My words you ask for.
At the end-time I will say:
'Begone! I never knew you!'

MoonFairy
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I'm just stalking the forums like usual, when I see: Tanka Contest Theme: Miracles Pg 19. Due: 29th.
My thoughts? SOMEONE MADE A NEW CONTEST! But then I saw the views. So I clicked it. Saw my OP.
FEELING OF NOSTALGIA.
Stalkstalkcreepstalkcree-cree-stalk.

I hope that Moon won't mind if I judge, because a few people have been asking to revive this thing.

LOLSURE.

That is all. Feel free to take this. I might wanna judge sometime in the summer if this is still alive, but for now, I should go shove my face back in my History textbook.
StormDragon
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Miracles of Life
Birth and rebirth Jesus lets
us have two births
We act like we are born once
Will we acknowledge the Cross?

TackyCrazyTNT
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I don't really feel like staying up until midnight, and it doesn't seem as if anyone else is going to submit, so

CLOSED.

Judging will happen tonight maybe. Probably.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Maverick

What signs must I give?
You refuse to listen, yet
My words you ask for.
At the end-time I will say:
'Begone! I never knew you!'


I like it a lot, Mav, but it doesn't seem to be too closely tied to miracles. Or maybe I'm just stupid. You get third place and a chicken sandwich!

jeol

Floods of searing pain,
Tearing deep inside of her -
When, as to forgive,
Her infant was given birth;
The child, miracle of hers.


It's really nice, wife.
The only criticism I might have is that it seems that you tried a little too hard to manuever the lines to fit the syllables. That's one of the only things I don't like about heavily structured poetry, like tankas or haikus. You get second place and a silver pen.

Waluigi

The world, lifeless, dark
no sign of a change in pace,
but a spark, then light
encompass the world, bright'ning,
a world created, sheer luck.


Everything about this is great. The idea, the phrasing, and flow of the lines. -applauds-
You get first place, bragging rights, and a sack of coffee beans.

I don't know where I got the chicken sandwich, silver pen or coffee beans from, by the way. I typed whatever popped into my head.

This is what happens when I judge.
waluigi
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Oh my God! I won something. Now to go grind up these coffee beans. Course, its a long hike back home...err, I'll send it to the CTers.

44Flames
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Yes what is the next theme?

TackyCrazyTNT
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New theme is Stress.

GOGOGOGO.

StormDragon
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"Stress, it's a killer."
Bartok said that in a movie.
Science would agree.
Bartok is a fictional
bat but science backs him up.

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