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First Line Poetry

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 1:24am

aknerd

aknerd

1,431 posts

wowza nice job Aknerd!


Thanks, but it's all lies. The internet is my bff.

What you see is not me - I have died
I do not notice those who cried
Or who kept dry with pride
Or my now-never-bride
Or mom at my side.
To death I ride
My life denied
Wish I'd
tried.

New line:
But I never did.
 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 1:29am

samy

samy

5,043 posts

But I never did;
Express the love I had for you
Tell you what you were to me
Explain that you were my life;
My love
My soul
And now I never will.

New line:
It is myself.

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 3:15am

samdawghomie

samdawghomie

3,672 posts

It is myself
I see in the mirror
A person full of glee
A person that is carefree

Sky is the limit,
Danger is just a title
To confuse the worrysome

Myself I see in the mirror.

Hmm, I seriously have no frickin Idea. lol.

Staring into the night

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 3:42am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,417 posts

Staring into the Night
I see
How amazing dark can be.

Stars are glistening
People asleep
Looking into the water
You can't tell how deep

All is quiet
You are alone
To ponder the thoughts
Of places unknown

Streaks of soft light begin to show
Light clouds caress the sky
The night begins to fade, although
You will see such beauty when the day says good bye.



eh, I rushed it.... Oh wellz.

Passing the time

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 11:20am

DarkestNite

DarkestNite

166 posts

Passing the time
I feel like a mime
I lost my voice
I had no choice

I spoke a word
But no one heard
I tried to shout
But nothing came out

I try to scream
Is it all a dream?
I'm trapped in this prison
No speech, no vision

I am left alone
Another unknown
I will die in peace
Death, is my release.

Next line
lay a flower

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 11:23am

DarkestNite

DarkestNite

166 posts

meh... 2 mins is not enough time to make a good poem :/ lol

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 11:56am

Avorne

Avorne

3,265 posts

Lay a flower
Upon your grave
Symbol of life
It slowly fades
Just as you
Faded from life

The ticking of the clock

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 12:08pm

Kyouzou

Kyouzou

5,231 posts

The ticking of the clock
Resounds deep with in my soul
A chain that I'm unable to unlock
My youth is taken as toll

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 12:11pm

Kyouzou

Kyouzou

5,231 posts

Sorry about the double post but I forgot to post the next first line.


The river flows

 

Posted Jul 9, '10 at 12:14pm

DarkestNite

DarkestNite

166 posts

The ticking of the clock
He pulls on the lock
Touch the darkness here
Feel his growing fear

See the blackend walls
See the drop as it falls
See it run through the cracks
And leave everlasting tracks

save him

 
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