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Posted Mar 28, '12 at 6:20pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

584 posts

Atmosphere is suffering,
and so am I
I feel that very soon
I will die

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I just typed this line. :O

 

Posted Mar 29, '12 at 11:03pm

light_chaser

light_chaser

1,092 posts

I just typed this line,
totally of the top of my mind,
but the good lord knows,
why I am looking at my nose,
and this is as random as it gets.

inky binky pinky and clyde

 

Posted Mar 30, '12 at 6:22pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

584 posts

inky binky pincky clyde
the cat went up the slide.
At the top a bot karate chopped
and sent the cat down the slide.
It broke its neck and three bones
and also broke a tailbone.
It was killed and skinned
and never was again alive.

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Posted Mar 30, '12 at 6:31pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

584 posts

oooopppss forgot line.

NEW LINE:

Oh, God

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 12:07am

FALLEN950

FALLEN950

166 posts

Oh, God
Not now
Please not now
Let me go with some dignity
Not like this, please
I'm begging you
No please
*bang*

Classic triangle shape poem?




Darkness consumes me

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 1:15am

cablecar1

cablecar1

158 posts

Darkness consumes me,
And my tears burn like alcohol,
Bringing me to poor, intoxicated judgements,
Filling me with the frenzied disarray of drunkenness.

I can barely see through my own darkness,
Much less a sheet of blurry tears.

There is so much darkness
And so little information
To decide what is truth
And what is falsehood-
Everyone believes what they see is true,
But they see through the same, clouded eyes,
As I do.

Woe to them.

Woe to me.

All is falsity,
But the falsity we see is so close to the truth
That everyone believes it to be
A reality.

So it is.

But it isn't.

There is only darkness.
Confusion.
Death.
Hate.
Love.
Life.
Clarity.
Light.

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A ring of sorrow

 

Posted Apr 4, '12 at 10:22am

light_chaser

light_chaser

1,092 posts

A ring of sorrow
will come tomorrow
in the dawn

It is not for a fawn
on your lawn
this is very weird
like my beard.

EPIC FAIL!!

 

Posted Apr 4, '12 at 1:52pm

jkl3848

jkl3848

245 posts

Epic Fail!!
Said the nail.
He went to jail.
And paid bail.

The best thing is

 

Posted Apr 4, '12 at 1:52pm

beastahayes

beastahayes

943 posts

Epic fail
Hit by hail
The size of a whale
Killed a snail

I was bit by a fish

 

Posted Apr 4, '12 at 10:37pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

584 posts

I was bit by a fish
and got the contagious
fish disease
that removed my bones
and infected all i know
i was bit by a fish

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