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Posted Sep 19, '12 at 7:16pm

thewolf52

thewolf52

28 posts

I am not good at this but lets try
But the man walked on
Because for the dead, its useless to mourn
The unforgettable
Is this pain
He vowed his death,
Will not go in vane
He vowed revenge
He vowed in rage
To be the slayer
Or to be the slain.
Next
To be the slain

 

Posted Sep 19, '12 at 10:59pm

TackyCrazyTNT

TackyCrazyTNT

1,627 posts

To be the slain, to be the maimed,
To be midst those strewn on the plains,
To be those faces left forgotten,
Left in places, corpses rotten,
Is not the dream of glory told,
By wizened soldiers, stories old.
The glory of the battle gone,
And death's last rattling song,
Ringing out from voices young,
Their love ballads yet unsung.

I just want to understand

 

Posted Sep 19, '12 at 11:35pm

Gantic

Gantic

6,767 posts

Moderator

I just want t' understand
Why this o' all days in the land
Be a day of scurvy and
Speakin' of piratical brand
Why not on a day before
Why be it this day? What for?
Be this a tradition or
An old salt's joke? Neither nor?
I have not an answer yet.
Thar be no answer I would bet.
This day just be a day t' whet
Slurrin' o' the alphabet.

Pirates be better than ninjas

 

Posted Sep 20, '12 at 2:10pm

Kyouzou

Kyouzou

4,753 posts

Pirates be better than ninjas
What blasphemy!?
Masters of shadow,
Wielders of death,
Inferior?

Drunken sea rats,
Wouldn't be better,
Ever.
Why matey,
You've had a bit too much grog.

Flitting through the sky

 

Posted Sep 20, '12 at 6:26pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

514 posts

Flitting through the sky
like an old day butterfly
sitting on a fence
lies a frog.
silently waiting to strike
___________________________________

The Legend of the pie

 

Posted Sep 21, '12 at 8:09pm

thewolf52

thewolf52

28 posts

Have you heard of the legend of the pie?
Have you heard of that fat guy?
Who got sick by eating pie
He vowed that till the day he dies
He will not eat no more pies
Even if choice is to eat pie or to die

 

Posted Sep 21, '12 at 8:11pm

thewolf52

thewolf52

28 posts

Next :-
Reign of death.

 

Posted Sep 21, '12 at 9:46pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

Reign of death.
Prey, why don't you lighten my load?
Totalitarian, and as your subject
You are responsible
For my very well being.

Or rather, a lack of.

And it's drawing closer.

 

Posted Sep 22, '12 at 2:20pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

514 posts

And it's drawing closer.
beware
it's stalking forward
be scared
it's here!
its a deer....
___________________________________

Braaaains....

 

Posted Sep 28, '12 at 8:56pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

Brains...
Mixed in with Scrambled eggs...
Are quite delicious.

But seriously, pig brains and eggs make for a really good breakfast. Its a southern thing. So to move along:

Why do you waste my time?

 
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