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First Line Poetry

Posted Sep 29, '12 at 12:21pm

mynameisraina

mynameisraina

3 posts

Carry on, obsequious one
Do your duty little
Mary Jane
Go through the motions
Over and over again.

Ice in my eyes, in my heart, in my feet.

 

Posted Sep 29, '12 at 12:22pm

mynameisraina

mynameisraina

3 posts

Carry on, obsequious one
Do your duty little
Mary Jane
Go through the motions
Over and over again.

Ice in my eyes, in my heart, in my feet.

 

Posted Sep 29, '12 at 5:24pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,355 posts

Er... Obsequies is plural for Obsequy, which is a funeral rite...

 

Posted Sep 29, '12 at 6:28pm

Salvidian

Salvidian

2,440 posts

Er... Obsequies is plural for Obsequy, which is a funeral rite...

You should see the smile on my face right now. xD

Alright then.

Man the doors

 

Posted Sep 30, '12 at 1:46pm

jezz

jezz

1,414 posts

Man the doors,
Draw the swords,
Don't turn to cowardice,
Turn to war.
Say a prayer,
Punch the air,
Face the field with a,
Defiant glare.

There's a lot that I don't know

 

Posted Oct 6, '12 at 11:52pm

ILikeTrains1212

ILikeTrains1212

5 posts

theres a lot that i dont know
like where some things do and dont go.
but ill tell you this
everything will go amist
when the bread maker sells his dough

hope that was good enough

the man walks slowly on the ground

 

Posted Oct 7, '12 at 12:09am

Salvidian

Salvidian

2,440 posts

The man walks slowly on the ground
He forgot his hat so he turned around
Upon twisting he saw something very profound
The thing he saw was a huge, smoking clown!

It was alive yesterday

 

Posted Oct 7, '12 at 1:02pm

jdoggparty

jdoggparty

3,260 posts

It was alive yesterday
Smiling with joy
How fun it was
to kill that boy

All I saw was darkness

 

Posted Oct 7, '12 at 1:57pm

smithey13

smithey13

1 post

sometimes i just wanna curl up and stop for a thousand years...
'cus maybe when i wake up there will be no-more tears...
theres also nothing else to do...
maybe it will make me stop missing you...

 

Posted Oct 14, '12 at 6:02am

StormWalker

StormWalker

1,643 posts

since the above seems to be song lyrics i think, i shall go with the above above.

All i saw was darkness
as i fell through outer space
i'd been shot with a lazer gun
from no other time or place
from then those EVIL lumpy blob creatures
who floated up to my door
and kicked me through the hallway wall
and clear through the windows nextdoor.

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I took out my brand new army boots

 
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