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Posted Oct 14, '12 at 6:02am

StormWalker

StormWalker

6,317 posts

since the above seems to be song lyrics i think, i shall go with the above above.

All i saw was darkness
as i fell through outer space
i'd been shot with a lazer gun
from no other time or place
from then those EVIL lumpy blob creatures
who floated up to my door
and kicked me through the hallway wall
and clear through the windows nextdoor.

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I took out my brand new army boots

 

Posted Oct 16, '12 at 12:13am

SunPixie

SunPixie

76 posts

I took out my brand new army boots,
And shuddered with a shiver.
How long ago
Had that message been delivered?
We were young but we became old.
We knew he wasn't coming back,
Without being told.
Mom wasn't the same anymore,
And my brothers turned bleak.
But when I walk out of this door,
It isn't revenge I seek.
I put on my new army boots,
And promised myself I'd be back.
Eventually I returned,
But my world was pitch black.

_____

I could face it if

 

Posted Nov 27, '12 at 1:30pm

MagicTree

MagicTree

773 posts

I could face it if I could,
I would defeat it. I should.
But how can I when the shadows cloud me?
When will I be released from this worry?
No one can save me now.
No one knows how.
I am all alone.

Now, next person do this line!

Never will I submit

 

Posted Nov 29, '12 at 7:53am

thepunisher93

thepunisher93

1,863 posts

Never will I submit
on a throne or on a spit.
On the streets being hit
Such things can't discourage me a bit.
the time wi

 

Posted Nov 29, '12 at 5:55pm

thepunisher93

thepunisher93

1,863 posts

and time will show
what have you done
you'll have to choose
the sword or the gun
you'll have to choose
pastor or nun
you might meet your wife
you might meet your son
but when that day comes
you'll never ever see the sun.
and when they put noose around your neck
you'll want to hide, you'll want to run
and when you fall from deck
you might break your neck
if not you poor bast ard
you'll strangle to death
your tongue will come out
your neck will be streched
on your tombstone
these words will be etched
"here lies the man"

 

Posted Nov 30, '12 at 3:15pm

MagicTree

MagicTree

773 posts

Here lies the man.
The man that ruined my life.
The man that tore the tears out of my eyes.
The man that didn't care if I cried.
The man that thought my pain was funny.
The man that didn't care for money.
The man that only needed to see pain.
The man who I would've liked to maim.
The man who needed to go away.
The man that would hurt me with what he would say.
The man that, at night, would make me turn and toss.
The man that when I think of him...
I feel a loss.

I'm being pretty angst now. ;)

Do:
I wonder will it ever stop?

 

Posted Dec 4, '12 at 6:26pm

StormWalker

StormWalker

6,317 posts

I wonder will it ever stop?
I've been whirling past mountains
through the earth through fire through smoke
and then out the otherside
past the cows and sheep and pigs
through hell and out, through the sun and back
and then finally, i land on my feet
on the lovely planet of jupiter
so i died by inhalation
of poisonous smokey things, and also
the fact that i was sqaushed
--
and then the world exlploded

 

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 5:18am

Star_Shine

Star_Shine

17 posts

and then the world exlploded

and then the world will exploded
And then i'll go for shopping
To Buy Some New Toppings,
And Make Some CheeseParrings
And I'll Go For Cropping
And Will Be Back At 10:18

 

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 9:49pm

StormWalker

StormWalker

6,317 posts

no next line...? okay....
----
and as I looked into the depths of the screen,
my eyes widenend and I stifled a scream,
because in front of my face, black words on a white page,
THERE WAS NO NEW LINE
so I went off and raged.
---
After that, there was a plate

 

Posted Dec 7, '12 at 9:25am

DreamAngel

DreamAngel

7 posts

after that there was a plate


And I were Late To Skate With My Date

But What Can I Do It Was My Fate,

And It Wasn't So Great.

But All I Could Do Was To Wait

Untill I Met Some1 Great,

Next line

Well My Fate Wasn't So BAD
 
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