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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 9:36am

Star_Shine

Star_Shine

17 posts

Well My Fate Wasn't So BAD

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I'm So Glad
At My Friend's Sucess
So We Both Play Japness Chess,
And Soon I Got Her Address,
And Went Off With A Request
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And That Request Was To Buy Her A Cocktail Dress
 

Posted Dec 13, '12 at 2:50pm

MagicTree

MagicTree

773 posts

And that request, to buy her a cocktail dress?
Oh, don't get me started!
I'll buy it, and I'll hope it fits.
But I ain't gonna pay for.it.
No, if she wants one, even if she begs me like a bunny,
I ain't gonna spend any of my money!
No matter how many puppy eyes,
I ain't gonna lie.
I am not buying her that dress!
Well, I would if it cost less.
NO! Don't mention it once more!
I'll lose it, for sure!

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The fire burns in her eyes...

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 2:12pm

TackyCrazyTNT

TackyCrazyTNT

1,955 posts

The fire burns in her eyes,
A passion that has yet to die
From our resounding argument.
Maybe the next time around
I'll just use acid on her instead.

So much guilt

 

Posted Jan 1, '13 at 11:59pm

Kyouzou

Kyouzou

5,231 posts

So much guilt,
Her face flashes before my eyes.
Oh God, what have I done!?

Blood puddles under a still form,
Flaxen hair frames a serene face.
In death, she found peace.

 

Posted Jan 2, '13 at 12:04am

Kyouzou

Kyouzou

5,231 posts

Whoops forgot the next line.

A melody in the silence

 

Posted Jan 2, '13 at 12:22am

AatosLiukkonen

AatosLiukkonen

67 posts

A melody in the silence,
Of coldness and despair,
A constant shift of power
And the silent noise in pair.

An instrument of darkness
And an instrument of pain,
Conduct the silent symphony
In the silent, quiet rain.

Lurking in the cold white light

 

Posted Jan 3, '13 at 8:48pm

SeaTurtle

SeaTurtle

120 posts

Lurking in the cold white light
Time stretches out a finger and beckons
Asking you to follow
But you are much too young
And it's much too soon

shivering cold, mind on fire

 

Posted Jan 3, '13 at 11:18pm

Devoidless

Devoidless

3,838 posts

Shivering cold, mind on fire
I still think of the day you left me in straights so dire
There in the midday light, asking me to walk
And once we got 'there', then we would talk
Talk about what? my brain repeatedly questioned
Even though the truth, I knew, I did not want mentioned
When we stopped, the words you started to mutter
Only confirmed the dark thoughts I dare not utter
I screamed and cursed, a park bench I did throw
Yet it was not out of anger, but pure sorrow
At that moment you walked out of life
Leaving me with naught more than strife

Wandering in circles with nowhere to go

 

Posted Jan 4, '13 at 12:57am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,241 posts

Knight

Wandering in circles with nowhere to go
I trudge aimlessly in the dirty snow,
Still smarting from that sudden blow,
A stone skids against the river's flow,
Towards the setting sun's faint glow.

Heart to Heart

 

Posted Jan 4, '13 at 1:51am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

9,704 posts

Heart to Heart
Oh where do we start?
Your badgering questioning
My constant pestering

An annoyance reaching astronomical heights
But only our odd minds could find such delights
Out of such toughened love
Ideological romanticism we shove

Painful recognition haunting my dreams

 
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