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Posted Apr 11, '13 at 5:13pm

StormWalker

StormWalker

2,871 posts

Jester, lone Jester, play me a song
Of all the things that have ever gone wrong
The sky down in flames, wreathing the moon
And al the bad things? Blams the raccoons.
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I'm glad this is back. Thanks, pang. now, the line:
Through fire, thorough smoke

 

Posted Apr 11, '13 at 5:36pm

Salvidian

Salvidian

3,950 posts

Through fire, through smoke
I fall, hurt and choke
Continuing to drink coke

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I'm glad this is back. Thanks, pang.

You mean Icy.

 

Posted Apr 11, '13 at 5:37pm

Salvidian

Salvidian

3,950 posts

Oops.

The deniability of it

 

Posted Apr 15, '13 at 5:21pm

StormWalker

StormWalker

2,871 posts

The deniability of it, the it, any it
an orbit way past the state of it
but what is this it? I can't fathom
what it must be, to drive those that I see insane
but it is it
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You mean Icy.

*waves hands around* I hand thanks to everyone. ;)
And you know what it is?

 

Posted May 2, '13 at 4:53pm

IcyIndia

IcyIndia

545 posts

And you know what it is?
The sheer audacity
Is what kills you. Nothing to do
but wait.
and see
and
watch.

Hand-prints on the ground, foot-prints on the wall

 

Posted May 3, '13 at 10:30pm

StormWalker

StormWalker

2,871 posts

Hand-prints on the ground, foot-prints on the wall
looking all around as the ceiling starts to fall
How in the world did I even get here?
All I know is that the end is near...
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The ground collapses

 

Posted Jun 20, '13 at 2:00am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,277 posts

The ground collapses
My constant relapses
Never stopping, never fleeting
Always constant, so defeating
pushing pressing pounding playing
From this world I am straying
Hold me holding holding cups
As my mind slowly erupts

Destruction costs more than a hen in a cow farm

 

Posted Jun 20, '13 at 12:36pm

SunPixie

SunPixie

76 posts

Destruction costs more than a hen in a cow farm
I do not know how to continue this poem.

sorry for that but HEY WOW FLP IS BACK THIS IS AMAZING

Bitter memories

 

Posted Jun 20, '13 at 12:46pm

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,277 posts

Bitter memories,
Salted dreams,
Fleeting tenderly
down the stream

I hold my breath,
As my air escapes.
I submerge my head
so the water may drape.

A Pixie better make a real poem from this

 

Posted Jun 20, '13 at 4:00pm

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

3,231 posts

A Pixie better make a real poem from this,
Yet I am not a Pixie, but I hope that's okay,
I remember this thread; It makes me reminisce,
About all the things I've used to post and say,

I don't know what else to say for this stanza,
Maybe I should just stop talking,
Or tell people about how much I love pandas,
The failure of this poem is really shocking.

Yep. I'm definitely stopping after this one,
Or maybe I should continue,
Nah, I'm going to have a bit of fun,
Except, I can't find a rhyme with continue.


Two sides of the same coin

 
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