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Posted Jul 3, '10 at 7:42pm

pHacon

pHacon

1,941 posts

How do I get out of here?
This nightmare, it controls me.
There is but one way out,
But that requires more than I am able.

The way is shut,
The drums are sounding,
My time draws near,
My heart is pounding.

As I see his face
Terror grips me
My worst enemy is:
Myself.

Random, yet not...

Help us escape

 

Posted Jul 3, '10 at 11:43pm

Gantic

Gantic

10,052 posts

Moderator

Help us escape
Cardboard prisons
We've grown too big
Please help, children

I did not know your name when we first met

 

Posted Jul 3, '10 at 11:51pm

Secretmapper

Secretmapper

1,783 posts

I did not know your name when we first met
But when I ask you would always threat
That you would cut my head off so that
It can shut up and wear no bad hat


ARMORGAMES IS THE BEST SITE EVER!

 

Posted Jul 3, '10 at 11:51pm

aknerd

aknerd

1,431 posts

Help us escape
Your life is already Forfeit
You death already certain
to be horrible.

The sharks are hunting
But one catch
Will be
enough


But We
Our future obscure,
Doom questionable.
A singular fool cannot
Compare to an eternal pool

The hawkes will gladly
Take just one
And leave
Us

We are endless
But trapped
Our children, not yet born
Trapped with us
Your everything ends
with you

The Wolves are hungry
You can satisfy
Their need
Easily

Help us escape

That got a little dark...
!@#$%^ I got ninja'd.

Well here's a short poem so that my new line will still count.

I did not know your name when we first met
But you knew mine
You showed up at my door
And served me a subpoena
What are you doing later?

Next:
A Leafless Branch

 

Posted Jul 4, '10 at 12:00am

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,557 posts

A leafless branch.
Pity.
Cold wind ripped you.
Oh cruel.
It sheds your cloak
Relentless.
Of golden greens and red.
Monster.
Where will you hide?
Child.
Until spring comes.

Next: Amid the wonders and tears I smile.

 

Posted Jul 4, '10 at 12:08am

Secretmapper

Secretmapper

1,783 posts

Amid the wonders and tears I smile
Sweet I yuck and bitter are mine
GOOD is bad while BAD is good
And happy is sad while sad is jolly!

Old Macdoneld(to prevent copyright issues) had a sl*t

 

Posted Jul 4, '10 at 1:00pm

aknerd

aknerd

1,431 posts

Sl*t? I don't know what word you were trying to write, so I'll assume you meant "slot".

Old Macdonel had a slot
In which he hid his lot
But instead of beer, pipes and bowls
Old Macdoneld hid bones, hands, and skulls

Every night he would go to the city
And dance around, meet someone pretty
He would ask her to come to his place
Where he would then cut of her face

With each new sucessful kill
Over the years this slot did fill
Till one day the smell overflowed
Carried all the way down the road

Where sherrif Johnson could easily smell
The work of that farmer from hell
So instead of going to the city that night
Old Macdoneld was hung from a height

Hey, it had a happy ending. I guess.

New line

It was the happiest time of his life

 

Posted Jul 4, '10 at 2:31pm

slayguy8

slayguy8

729 posts

It was the happiest time of his life
when he could walk
when his dreams were pure
then
now
he has to suffer
now the dreams are haunted
he can not walk
it was the worst time of his life

[b]As the sun sets it is a picture perfect moment[b]

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 3:29am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,423 posts

As the sun sets it is a picture perfect moment,
I grab my camera to preserve it forever.
But I was a moment too late,
And you couldn't see the brilliance.
I will try again on a later date.

lmfaooooooo. Sucks.

Petals falling from a wilting flower

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 3:36am

Joey6855

Joey6855

203 posts

Petals falling from a wilting flower,
Only lasting for a hour.
We are weightless in the wind,
Carrying us to our end.
But one thing I'll always know,
I will go where I need to go.

Sucks.....

The star shines alone

 
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