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Posted Jul 5, '10 at 3:52am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,417 posts

I like it! It is good XD

The star shines alone,
The light is blinding.
But beautiful.
Then I noticed the others around it.
All just as amazing,
Yet they shine on their own.
Together, but seperate.
Breathtaking.

This one sucks. I am trying my hand at non rhyming poems. freestyle-ish.

Dark mornings, Light Nights.

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 3:53am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,417 posts

Dark mornings, Light Nights.
Whoops. My bad! I don't want this to be spam so I am adding more. Now it has a purpose mwahahahahaha. >:3

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 3:58am

Joey6855

Joey6855

203 posts

I liked it but OMG this ones gonna be hard to make....

Dark Mornings, Light Nights,
Alarm Lights, Night Lights,
They drive our emotions,
setting us into motion,
To strive to make our mornings bright,
and our nights have no light.
So that we may sleep.


Wow that made no friggin sense at all......XD

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 4:02am

Joey6855

Joey6855

203 posts

Opps forgot to post the next line....


I wake to the dawn,

I think ima do another one useing my line but its the same for the next perosn to use...

I wake to the dawn,
and see the white-tailed fawn,
Looking for the doe,
having no where to go.
I hear the howl of the dogs,
she trips over logs.
The dogs take her away,
but now she is with her mother to stay.

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 5:01am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,417 posts

Sad D:

I wake to the dawn.
The early morning sun,
Is rising to greet me.
Fills me with energy,
As I wonder what I will see.

I step out into the sunlight,
Looking upon all the beautiful colors of nature.
The green on the leaves and the green ground.
A lavender flower petal falls without making a sound.

I walk with a purpose.
Throught my day.
The light, bouncy, air around me,
Begs for me to play.

So I skip through the yellow fields of wheat.
I climb up the old, faithful tree.
This day is such a wonderful treat.
It is amazing just to be.

When the day begins to darken,
I begin to feel tired.
So I walk back to my home,
And dream of the beauty of nature.
I am ready for a new dawn.

Eh, not my best. Oh well. :3 I enjoyed writing it.

Climbing up the ladder

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 5:33am

Secretmapper

Secretmapper

1,783 posts

Climbing up the ladder,
Oh such fun!
Climbing up challenges,
Oh such moan!
Stepping on the steps,
Oh such joy!
Stepping on feet,
Oh such nay!

Next Line:
Secretmapper is such a bad writer!

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 12:41pm

aknerd

aknerd

1,431 posts

*Sigh*

Secret mapper is such a bad writer
and yet he keeps on writing
A Plethora of perseverance
Creates Confusion
Tanking Threads
The next poet pouts
Wishing for a serious first line

Next
I glimpsed a burst of happiness

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 12:57pm

CommanderDude7

CommanderDude7

4,753 posts

I glimpsed a burst of happiness
As my oppenent thought he had victory
I glanced at my cards
And wondered what he had
Whatever it was
Could it beat a full house?

The fish swam happily

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 5:04pm

slayguy8

slayguy8

729 posts

The fish swam happily
with no cares in his fish world
until one day
he wasn't smart
he was caught
thats the power of thought



BAD REALLY BAD

The confusing power of love

 

Posted Jul 5, '10 at 5:15pm

Avorne

Avorne

3,265 posts

The confusing power of love
It bewitches, beguiles and betrays
It can build and it can destroy
Love is indeed a powerful thing
It boggles the human brain
It grips the hearts of two
And using its greatest power
Binds them together as one

Air so crisp and water so clear

 
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