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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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mongo89
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Marquis

I Lost my sunglasses
while the enemies comes
Here comes the sun
I shoot at them bum bum
They were running like panda

the Apocalpse has begun

Shoeminor
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Shoeminor
912 posts
Blacksmith

The apocalypse has begun
Blazing saddles reach out to the
Ends of the earth,tearing,tearing.

A broken heart leads

Frank_Frooton
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4,002 posts
Bard

A broken heart leads
through many a dreadful road.
Overrun by sorrow and evil deeds,
Wavering in the small chance of a sight,
Just to catch a glimpse of the only light.
Where my broken heart leads,
will destroy all sacred promises and creeds.

A small detour on a cold winter night

Omegap12
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Omegap12
1,980 posts
Shepherd

A small detour on a cold winter night
To grab a cup of coffee
Hot
Strong
Comforting
And Loving.

Its closer everyday

Frank_Frooton
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Frank_Frooton
4,002 posts
Bard

It's closer every day
the money, the jewels,
the guns, the shooting, the breaking of all rules,
for soon comes my Payday.

A short story by the fireside

Saphire24
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3,114 posts
Scribe

A short story by the fireside
Of this will I never be denied
While my dog warms her furry hide
to a short story told by fireside.

Running over rooftops

Frank_Frooton
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Frank_Frooton
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Bard

^ made me want a dog.

Running over rooftops
With the wind pounding 'gainst my face
I hazard a glance to the river below
And see myself,
All covered in snow.

Through a snowman's glassy eyes

Saphire24
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Scribe

Through a snowman's glassy eyes
children I espies
running in their wild way
plead with me to try to stay
making me want to cries

Once there was a cherry tree

Frank_Frooton
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Frank_Frooton
4,002 posts
Bard

^ that scared me.

Once there was a cherry tree,
Who grew cherries as good as could be.
Beside this our lovely cherry tree
Grew an upset pumpkin patch
"Do tell, brother pumpkin"
The cherry did ask,
"Why art thou angry, and full of wrath?"
The pumpkin grumbled a little, and came out with this
"Come down to my low level, thou Proud Cherry Tree,
And you shall see the demise of poor lowly me."
Heeding these words from the pumpkin, our Tree bent low to the ground and listened-
*Squish* "Tonight" *squash*" Tonight tonight "*squashy*
"Brother pumpkin, what makes such noise,
and squashes your friends, as a child with toys?"
The Pumpkin looked up with a face full of grief
"Dear Cherry Tree, 'tis the band made of Billy Corgan
They have given themselves a name out rumpkins,
For they art the "Smashing Pumpkins."
Thus ends the ballad of The Cherry Tree, Billy Corgan, and the Pumpkin.

The lights of this tree do shine so bright

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

The lights of this tree do shine so bright,
Shimmering beacons in the night,
Twinkling with tranquil delight,
Encapsulated might.

SirLegendary
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SirLegendary
16,583 posts
Duke

@Frank_Frooton, here you go.

Encapsulated might,
a power that's scary
a weapon out of sight
something that is legendary

Frank_Frooton
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Frank_Frooton
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Bard

Something that is legendary
is lurking behind this door
the stench of blood and taste of fear
it gluttonously feeds on daily.

I've never been to South Dakota

SirLegendary
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Duke

I've never been to south Dakota,
I'm here now for vacation
All I need is a soda,
and a coffee mocha

I'm going back home now
this isn't what I wanted
I'm just thinking how
It hurts to be here, ow.

Erabor
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Erabor
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Nomad

It hurts to be here, ow
Pain pollutes my body,
And I can only ask how.
How- it echoes within me,
a simple word with vast meaning.

Calling in sick

Frank_Frooton
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4,002 posts
Bard

Calling in sick
from this life that mines my soul with a horrible pick
ripping through my heart to hear its slowing beat
my body begins to chill from my sore head to weary feet
calling in sick to go to my grave
those at work and home will never have to worry if I'll ever
call in sick to mis-behave.

Talking through a winter storm

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