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The Words and Workings of Wolf

Posted Oct 15, '10 at 2:13pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,061 posts

Stranger

Dearest at the door you shall hear a knocking.
A knocking and nothing more.
And should the knocking cease you may hear a scratching.
A scratching and nothing more.
Now, dearest should this happen,
Should the door come a knocking and then a scratching,
The please do not hesitate.
Answer, answer the door.

Ah, door you hear that knocking?
Yes, yes our guest has come.
Quick girl! To the door!
That's it, yes, yes to the door, to the door and nothing more.

 

Posted Oct 19, '10 at 9:43am

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,061 posts

"I will look to history to guide my future, and in doing so I will walk backwards through life. To look to my future for guidance would mean to turn my back on my mistakes."

-Tyler Kent

 

Posted Oct 20, '10 at 8:59am

Efan

Efan

2,692 posts

you are one of the hardest people to comment on in AG as your work isn't flawed. It is. Saying good job is all you can say really.

 

Posted Oct 20, '10 at 11:31am

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,061 posts

Oh my work is flawed plenty. lol you have to keep an open mind about it.

 

Posted Oct 20, '10 at 11:40am

Efan

Efan

2,692 posts

your right i lied.

 

Posted Oct 21, '10 at 12:21pm

latpasko

latpasko

217 posts

beutiful, just beutiful.

 

Posted Oct 21, '10 at 10:39pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,061 posts

The bitter poison I drink
Day in and out
Is of mine own making.
Only to slake the thirst
That I have brought upon myself.
Oh dearest Bre,
Within love I lose sanity.
To wake to an image of your face
Which haunts my dreams.
Please take me hand
And tell me you were wrong.
Your comfort is all I seek.

 

Posted Oct 21, '10 at 11:06pm

Efan

Efan

2,692 posts

beutiful, just beutiful.

your spelling isn't.

Please take me hand

my?
If the poetry tells a story it is very elusive.It sounds to me that you are being indirect on purpose (that annoys me but I don't know why)

 

Posted Oct 21, '10 at 11:08pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,061 posts

Well if I feel like being Irish it could be me. But it is my. Sadly there is no edit button.

 

Posted Oct 21, '10 at 11:11pm

Efan

Efan

2,692 posts

Well if I feel like being Irish it could be me

you are an Irish Canadian wolf that writes poetry.

Oh dearest Bre,

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