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The Words and Workings of Wolf

Posted Oct 31, '10 at 9:36pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,054 posts

Howling

Howling at the moon.
Lusting for the freedom
That breaks these chains.
That holds this form
In place of my true self.

**Just something quick and fun for halloween.

 

Posted Nov 1, '10 at 12:49am

Efan

Efan

2,146 posts

Your astronaut one didn't really flow. Or was that the effect?

Howling

I'm imagining you walking outside after writing that and howling =)

 

Posted Nov 1, '10 at 12:50am

Efan

Efan

2,146 posts

Remember the werewolf episode of DR who?

 

Posted Nov 2, '10 at 4:38pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,054 posts

Look what I found,
Another day of blank walls in this town.
You tell me you're okay,
I know you're okay.
I know nothing's changed,
But, I'll be ****ed if things are the same.
There's no where to go but outwards, onwards.

And everything is the same,
It's all day to day
Day to day.
But everything's changed.

The sun rises
And it seems like everyone is gone.
You tell me you're okay,
I know you're okay.
And this town will just burn for fun.
And I'll be ****ed if things haven't changed.
There's no where to go but somewhere, anywhere.

And everything is the same,
It's all day to day
Day to day.
Now everything has changed.

If you see me smilin'
Don't be shy, let me show you,
That I'm alright.
I know nothing has changed,
But, I'll be ****ed if things are the same.
And it's all day to day.

**Well here's my dreadful shot at writing lyrics. I'm trying to get a few friends I know (drummer and guitarist) to put some music to this, but I need to fine tune the words. Help me out here!**

 

Posted Nov 2, '10 at 4:40pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,054 posts

Ps: the starred out word is dam*ed

 

Posted Nov 2, '10 at 6:45pm

wajor59

wajor59

895 posts

The sun rises
And it seems like everyone is gone.
You tell me you're okay,
I know you're okay.
And this town will just burn for fun.
And I'll be ****ed if things haven't changed.
There's no where to go but somewhere, anywhere.

I'm no grammar major, as Gantic so eloquently stated on the 10-day Poetry Contest thread; but it seems to me if you can define what is burning in this town everything else will fall into place.
I'm also curious as to what exactly has or hasn't changed. Are you referring to a burning desire? Is the town burning because you're hot for your lady love? Mystery and discretion are wonderful attributes but try elaborating just a tiny bit more and then see what you think?

 

Posted Nov 2, '10 at 8:17pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,054 posts

>.> yay for not editing myself and thus misplacing words.

The line is supposed to read:

And I'll burn this town just for fun

 

Posted Nov 5, '10 at 11:27pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,054 posts

"You know, I don't give a d*mn soldier. You either pick up that sword and fall on it out there, or I pick it up and make you fall on it right here."- Captain Hren

 

Posted Nov 7, '10 at 6:23pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,054 posts

[/b]Moving On[b]

There's nothing left here.
It is only a memory.
A memory of better things
And of better times.
I'm still broken
With all I have to endure.
But I'm fixing myself
Ever so slowly,
No thanks to you.
So I'll take my memories
And I shall hold them dear
For they are all I now have
All I will have for now.
When you think on me
Let it be of times we shared
And let them twist you
And make you feel shamed.
You have broken me.
But I will be repaired.

 

Posted Nov 8, '10 at 4:23am

Efan

Efan

2,146 posts

The whole thing speaks for itself really. Angry angry vegeful.

 
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