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Brian266
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Ok. I am making a new story. If you would like to be a part of it, please leave me a message below. If not, wait for the first or next chapter to come out!

This is going to be the cast for the first chapter:

#1: Gen. Darian, the commander of the '' Light'', the alien frontier ship.

#2: Sgt. Jackson, commander of most of the alien frontier forces and the ''Nuclear Plane''.

#3: Col. Lucah, the commander of some of the alien frontier forces.

#4: Pvt. Johnson, put in charge of the right flanking unit.

#5: Amrl. Ash, in charge of the ''Explosive Starship''.

And that is the cast so far! I will be busy working on the first chapter, and or the 3rd chapter of my other story! Thanks!

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Brian266
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I'm sorry I have made a mistake!! #5 Admr. name isn't Ash!! I have talked to him and he said he would like his name changed. He wants it changed to Otto. Thanks for you cooperation!

XXAlienGirlXX
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Could I be in it?

Brian266
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Your already in it! You are Col. Lucah for cryin' out loud lol not to be mean! K aliengirl??

XXAlienGirlXX
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Oh...

Brian266
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Lol. Wait! Oh, and I got the idea from RightwRong just to let you know...

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Okay, please view the changes I have made...


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Ok. I am making a new story. If you would like to be a part of it, please leave me a message below. If not, wait for the first or next chapter to come out!

This is going to be the cast for the first chapter:

#1: Gen. Darian, the commander of the '' Light'', the alien frontier ship.

#2: Sgt. Jackson, commander of most of the alien frontier forces and the ''Nuclear Plane''.

#3: Col. Lucah, the commander of some of the alien frontier forces.

#4: Pvt. Johnson, put in charge of the right flanking unit.

#5: Adml. Otto, in charge of the ''Explosive Starship''.

And that is the cast so far! I will be busy working on the first chapter, and or the 3rd chapter of my other story! Thanks!

XXAlienGirlXX
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Yay, I cant wait.

halogunner
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i wanna be sgt. jackson

Brian266
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Adml. Otto was busy commanding his giant ''Explosive Starship''. Sudenlly, there was a loud noise.

Adml. Otto screamed to his men, ''Move, and find out who or what is causing this crap to happen!

It had been going like this the whole day so far. But that was about to change...

Meanwhile, Pvt. Johnson and all his units were getting peppered by only some of the troops on the 'elite team'. The elite team was a huge, powerful group with pretty much all the defense and attacking units there was at the time.

Sgt. Nickleson was on the Elite Team. He was doing good damage to Pvt. Johnson and his men... Then, there was another loud noise... And flames came in every direction. The trenches burned. Pvt. Johnson looked again but the scene was different. Sgt. Nickleson was lying on the battlefield, dead. Pvt. Johnson and his left-over men from his team were about to claim there victory when they heard shooting....

Brian266
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You can be Sgt. Jackson sure! Oh, and by the way, that was chapter 1

XXAlienGirlXX
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That was a good chapter, it was very organized. =)

Brian266
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Thanks

Brian266
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Next chapter coming soon! Thanks for being patient!

XXAlienGirlXX
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Okay cant wait.

Brian266
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Ok. Another day of back-breaking school and Im back. Yay! Ok. THinking of the next chapter... Oh and thanks for being patient!!

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