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i would like to know wat u think of my story im writing for english class



My home is a place called four point oh. Most of the people here are not normal. There is vampires, humans, clowns, robots and were wolfs. The pets here are normal expect for dragons. My name is Danny and im a vampire. I became one on an afternoon of a full moon. I was skateboarding when a dark like man came over to me and ask what I was. âWhatâ? I asked. âWhat are youâ? âA humanâ I said not know what was going on. Then the man attack me and said I was going to become a vampire.
No one human knew about any these crazy animals. That was just the begining of my nightmares of the bazar world of four point oh.



so wat do u think so far

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