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Posted Aug 24, '11 at 9:28pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Hey, Mav. Your writing is great, I already told you, right?


Its always appreciated though.


Anyway, I told a friend of mine that happens to be an english teacher that I saw good poetry here on AG. She asked me to show her.

So, I was thinking: Can I take some of your poetry to show to her?


Wow, thats awesome. Yeah man, have at it. Just mention I'm the writer, works are not to be distributed, etc, etc. Heres my more favorite works, though you're welcome to take anything. And any of my Haikus, too. Again, thats awesome, and thanks a bunch.

The Good Ship, Woadship (Page 2)
A Creation (Page 5)
My Tears Flow from Kokytos (Page 5)
The Artist *V.2* (Page 6)
I lose control./Step in, step out, (Page 10)
Another Tragedy (Page 11)
Life Time Serenity (Page 12)
The Milky Way Waltz (Page 13)
 

Posted Aug 25, '11 at 11:51am

Roger721

Roger721

1,098 posts

Wow, thats awesome. Yeah man, have at it. Just mention I'm the writer, works are not to be distributed, etc, etc. Heres my more favorite works, though you're welcome to take anything. And any of my Haikus, too. Again, thats awesome, and thanks a bunch.


Thanks for allowing me and thanks for having so much nice poetry!

Because the lack of time (I needed to show them to her today by the morning or only next week) I only took your Mountains Nonet. I showed to her at 10PM (AGT)

She was amazed, even though that she found the part that said "Dead" a little bit too dark for her. I putted your username (as I don't know your real name) on the bottom of the sheet.

Also, I translated it to portuguese and showed it to a portuguese teacher. She likes poetry very much. She will see it next week because she's very busy.

I'll take more next week.

Keep up the good work!
 

Posted Aug 25, '11 at 9:06pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Thats awesome. Thanks a lot man.

 

Posted Sep 2, '11 at 7:47pm

Roger721

Roger721

1,098 posts

I took some more poetry last monday. Once again, she was amazed. I can't recall now which ones I showed to her. :P

I talked to that portuguese teacher that I translated your Mountains Nonet. She loved it! She even asked me to translate more! I'll translate those I took this week for her and let you know what she thought about it.

 

Posted Sep 2, '11 at 7:49pm

Roger721

Roger721

1,098 posts

fixing:

I talked to that portuguese teacher that saw the translated version of your Mountains Nonet
 

Posted Sep 2, '11 at 9:24pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Thats cool. Just try to remember which ones you've shown her, especially if they have a critique or think something isn't good.

 

Posted Sep 2, '11 at 11:15pm

Roger721

Roger721

1,098 posts

especially if they have a critique or think something isn't good.


*sighs*

Every single one of them made they amazed.

Gosh, you certainly have a melancholic point of view about this...

Your writing is awesome! Think higher!
 

Posted Sep 3, '11 at 1:15pm

frisko12

frisko12

425 posts

wow your good.

 

Posted Sep 3, '11 at 10:00pm

RikJimmy00

RikJimmy00

240 posts

great poetry you could win a lot of points at my school -.-

ΠίνδαÏοÏ
 

Posted Sep 7, '11 at 5:22pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Gosh, you certainly have a melancholic point of view about this...


With pessimism, you're never surprised: When the worst happens, its expected. When something good happens, then something isn't finished working itself bad.

wow your good.


Thanks.

great poetry you could win a lot of points at my school -.-


Thanks.
 
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