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Posted Mar 3, '12 at 8:58pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

I'm getting this thread locked, because it seems I can't put out any poetry without it being of a lack luster quality. So until I actually find that spark of inspiration, you won't be hearing any more from me.

Sorry for the inconvienance, if any.

 

Posted May 25, '12 at 10:06pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Regeneration

Rise
Up from
The ashes
And take form from
All that used to be.
Ignite, and consume whats
Left, that the flames might guide me
As I move forward into bliss.

 

Posted Aug 25, '12 at 2:17pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Not Destiny, Just Fate

The night life, the bright life, I just want the good life.
I hope that I make it somehow.
Soon I will learn how to sweep up the ashes,
And make sense of all that remains.
And make sense of all that remains.

Hello dear, you're what I fear.
You're waiting for me to fall down,
You're waiting for me to lose!

You promise yet, I'll suffer less.
You say it as if I could choose,
You say it like I can win!

Ever so slowly you creep down the freeway.
Now you're standing at my front door..
I knew you would find me, and knew you would tell me,
That all of my dreams can come true.
That all of my dreams can come true.

Hello dear, you're what I fear.
You're waiting for me to fall down,
You're waiting for me to lose!

You promise yet, I'll suffer less.
You say it as if I could choose,
You say it like I can win!

You say it as if I could choose,
But may be I can still win...

 

Posted Sep 2, '12 at 11:30pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Taking the Stage, Sonata #5

Baby, don't you love me?
Darling, please don't hurt me.
Honey, you can't leave me!
Still you just turn and walk away...

-----

It's allright, I'm ok.
I don't need you any way!
It's not like it was love.

Don't worry, I'll be fine.
All of my friends are around!
You won't even be missed.

Well, I'll prob'bly feel fine in awhile.
Well, I'll prob'bly forget about her.
Well, I'll prob'bly move on in a bit.
But when?

-----

Oh my God, what is this?
Why are you angry with me?
For was I not faithful?

Oh my God, how could you?
How could you let my love end,
And take her from my arms?

Well, how long must you punish me?
Well, how long must I deal with this?
Well, how long must pay I for it?
For her?

-----

Listen now, hear me out.
Listen to what I propose;
I promise that it's good.

Oh don't go, please don't go!
Why must you cast me away?
Why cant we just be friends?

Well, I thought that she'd see I'd changed.
Well, I thought I could buy my way back.
Well, I thought she could never say no.
To me.

-----

It's over, it is done.
I will never love again!
For she's ruined it all.

Misery, how I cry!
I can never move along!
So I guess it's the end.

Well, never again will I smile.
Well, never will the sun shine down.
Well, 'Never!' says my breaking heart!
To her.

-----

Have no fear, I'll move on!
Even though the pain lingers.
But I'll still think of you.

Watch me leave, watch me go!
And head out all on my own!
Though you'll still walk with me.

Well, all good things must come to a close.
Well, all good things taste so bittersweet.
Well, all good things float off on the breeze.
Away.

-----

Slowly, I will go on.
Kindly, comfort whispers.
Fin'ly, I'll have closure.
And then I'll turn and walk away.

 

Posted Sep 2, '12 at 11:44pm

daleks

daleks

3,707 posts

Mav? Mav is that you? Can you open up your comments again. I miss talking to you. Nice poems btw.

 

Posted Sep 3, '12 at 12:24am

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Of course its me! How many other semi-depressed seventeen year olds do you know?

It is done, and thanks.

 

Posted Sep 3, '12 at 4:47am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,302 posts

Knight

Hello Mav hope you overcome this hurdle in life and not end up like moi emoting. See the light at the end of the tunnel! Don't write emo poetry! And much less give it to your fresh ex like moi did in mine angiised state of mind. Take care.

 

Posted Sep 3, '12 at 1:16pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Thanks. But no worries on the last one. 1950s China and the US were more open than we are now.

 

Posted Sep 6, '12 at 10:04pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

But mice and men get second tries,
Unless that's all just koolaid-lies.

 

Posted Sep 15, '12 at 10:32am

HighlyCheesus

HighlyCheesus

1 post

Good =]

 
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