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iamnotironman
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I am making a play/story of the end of life.I will not start it yet because I'll need some people to ask to be in the event.Once I get 10 volunteers I will begin.I dont think it will be that good but I know it will be better than the movie 2012.Here are the volunteers:


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DeadlyVelociraptor
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this was abandoned long ago... joining is just stupid now...

iamnotironman
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Ok Ill do it tomorrow.List:

iamnotironman
ZombieFreak77
d_dude
DeadlyVelocoraptor
slayguy 8
IceIndia
jaza_m
chloe015
ExplosizeDynamite.

There is the list ya happy now?

DeadlyVelociraptor
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wait... your back? Can't we just start this, whatever it is?

iamnotironman
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Yea Im back but I need time to think it up.

ExplosiveDynamite
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Shouldn't you have thought it up before you made the topic?

iamnotironman
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Yes but I didnt know who was volunteering and it helps because I think of what they should be by their name.

iamnotironman
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What are you talking about?I think your on the wrong thread.

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By the way this is my first play so don't by surprised if its not good.
Part 1:The Beginning of the End

ZombieFreak77(senator of Oregon)-Mr. President I think we have a problem.

d_dude(President)-What would that be ZombieFreak.

ZombieFreak77-I'm afraid the world is going to end.
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It was a great day in the state of Oregon...

iamnotironman(main character)-Time to go on our trip.

slayguy 8(son)-Where are we going again?

iamnotironman-Yellowstone National Park.

slayguy 8-Oh yeah. (thinks:the boringest place in the world)

iamnotironman-Here we are.

slayguy 8-Woop de doo.

DeadlyVelcoraptor(crazy/wise guy)Hey you two!Have you heard anything about the end of the world!

iamnotironman-Excuse me?

DeadlyVelcoraptor-You heard me.

iamnotironman-Uh......no I guess.

slayguy 8-Dad who's the weird guy?

iamnotironman-I don't know slayguy.

slayguy 8-Then why are you talking to him.

iamnotironman-I don't know.
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Back in Washington D.C. ............

d_dude-Um.....OK.

ZombieFreak77-I'm serious Mr. President.

d_dude-Let me see your papers.

ZombieFreak77:Here they are.

d_dude-Oh my God you weren't kidding.

ZombieFreak77-Well, should we tell the rest of the world?

d_dude-No,only the leaders of their country.

ZombieFreak77-Why not?

d_dude-They will all go crazy.
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In Australia........

jaza_m(leader of Australia)-Have you heard about this end of the world stuff IcyIndia?

IcyIndia(2nd in command)-No I really don't believe any of that kind of stuff.

jaza_m-Well,every other place has shown signs of it...except Africa.

IcyIndia-Should we tell anyone to come over here?

jaza_m-Only the leaders of their country,Australia will become overpopulated
IcyIndia-Yes,good point.
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To be continued...



There is part 1, hoped you liked it!

characters to come:
chloe015
ExplosiveDynamite

DeadlyVelociraptor
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hehe... nice... Don't get why the end of the world comes but I like my part... not that its actually me but whateve...

ExplosiveDynamite
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I am a to come character? Booo! It seems pretty good though, nice job.

IcyIndia
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Haha, I like it. It's a pretty accurate impression of me, even though I only had three lines.

Anyway, you might want to take appearance into consideration? Like change this:



_____________________________________________________________________
In Australia........

jaza_m(leader of Australia)-Have you heard about this end of the world stuff IcyIndia?

IcyIndia(2nd in command)-No I really don't believe any of that kind of stuff.

jaza_m-Well,every other place has shown signs of it...except Africa.

IcyIndia-Should we tell anyone to come over here?

jaza_m-Only the leaders of their country,Australia will become overpopulated
IcyIndia-Yes,good point.
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To this?

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In Australia........

jaza_m (leader of Australia)
IcyIndia (2nd in command)


jaza_m: Have you heard about this end of the world stuff, IcyIndia?

IcyIndia: No I really don't believe any of that kind of stuff.

jaza_m: Well,every other place has shown signs of it...except Africa.

IcyIndia: Should we tell anyone to come over here?

jaza_m: Only the leaders of their country,Australia will become overpopulated

IcyIndia
: Yes,good point.
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I really, really liked the play, but it was just a bit difficult to read. Can't wait for the next part!
DeadlyVelociraptor
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oh and try to make me a bit more crazy.. I love paranoia... Maybe because I am crazy, don't you think you Imaginary velociraptor friend Bob? What? No? Oh well at least mister napkin agrees with me...

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it was just a bit difficult to read.


Yeah, it was a bit difficult to read..

My name, oh wait, it wasn't there.

And side note: Deadly, what's with the new armatar? D:
DeadlyVelociraptor
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I don't know I think it looks better than the fat close up mustache guy, ya know..

also it has a book and stuff...

If people liked my old armatar so much I'll change back to it...

DeadlyVelociraptor
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used to me? You seen my armatar fer only 1 day!

But again its good to know some one referring to me as if knowing me for long when they are actually new...

I feel guilty with talking about my armatar in this thread...

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