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The things in Neef's head.

Posted Mar 17, '11 at 8:08pm

Neef

Neef

149 posts

Hello people,

This is my thread, Thanks to Icy for the encouragement, and I'll post poems here, and you guys can do whatever. I mean, like you don't have to say anything, but it'd be nice to be critiqued once in a while. Since I'll post whenever...
T.T

 

Posted Mar 17, '11 at 8:17pm

Neef

Neef

149 posts

If you would have me,
Then I would not be so sad,
but you won't, so there.

I call that, Pathetic.
I can't get any insapration right now...

 

Posted Mar 17, '11 at 8:32pm

Neef

Neef

149 posts

Since i can't get inspiration,
I'll just write a poem 'bout the nothings in my head.

My thoughts,
are just floating,
waiting for the nothing to come,
and watching the nothings that pass.

a vast wasteland,
full of lacking,
Waiting for somthing,
That won't happen.

You could wait for seconds,
or hours or days,
you'd get nothin' I reckon',
as I'd be in a daze.

I ate air for breakfast,
Nibbled on some nitrogen,
and chewed on the carbon
and I gulped it all down,
with a few sips of oxygen.

 

Posted Mar 17, '11 at 9:01pm

Neef

Neef

149 posts

The emptyness,
Mocks me,
Blankness,
Tempting thee,
To fill it.
But i can't,
When i set my fingers,
Nothing comes to mind,
So I feel like a slate wiped clean,
Nothing occupying me.

my thoughts and my feelings,
have ran away,
leaving me deserted,
with nothing but more nothing.

 

Posted Mar 17, '11 at 9:02pm

Neef

Neef

149 posts

Who knew my inspiration would be my lack of insparation?

 

Posted Mar 18, '11 at 1:42am

Neef

Neef

149 posts

When you leave and don't come back for a while,
There is a missing piece inside of me,
Nothing will fill it but your words and your smile.
I need you to be here so that i can be happy.

 

Posted Mar 18, '11 at 3:21pm

Neef

Neef

149 posts

Morning!
well, morning for me because i just woke up. by the looks of it, It is afternoon. and now a poem.

When you don't want to let go,
It is easier not to say goodbye,
But to say hello.
Good night Vinod.

 

Posted Mar 19, '11 at 4:53am

SecretNinjaPineapple

SecretNinjaPineapple

23 posts

wow, great poems!
I loved the, "I ate air for breakfast,
Nibbled on some nitrogen,
and chewed on the carbon
and I gulped it all down,
with a few sips of oxygen" poem the best, but that could be 'coz I'm studying for a Chem test.. :P
and the poems about the nothings in your head were kinda cool too :)

 

Posted Mar 19, '11 at 12:25pm

Neef

Neef

149 posts

(After getting over the shock...
"People actually read my poems?"...)

Thanks... I guess i was kinda bored, so i just wrote some stuff down? Does that sound right? eh, whatever... Thanks I didn't have an idea what my poems would look like to other people (Maybe annoying?) so it's good to know.
Darn... out of inspiraton again. Oh well.

You led me to the end of my rope,
And kept me going with the promise of hope.
I couldn't believe that you were real,
I thought that this was all too surreal.
I have been alone for so long,
And I desperetley wanted to be wrong.

 

Posted Mar 20, '11 at 11:52am

Neef

Neef

149 posts

This cold, barren wasteland,
Is the beginnings of your heart,
Bathed in the blood of man,
Frozen over from the very start.

 
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