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Posted Nov 10, '11 at 8:49pm

Neef

Neef

86 posts

I'm Better off,
on my own,
cuse it's just my fate,
that i'd be alone.

I'll fall in love one day;
always going out of my way,
to keep them from harm and pain;
If only just to remain,
     Sane

Love;
is a dangerous game to play;
You can't survive,
without it by your side;
and with it, you can't live,
Dying, just to give,
your heart away.

 

Posted Nov 10, '11 at 9:16pm

Neef

Neef

86 posts

Entry form for the secret cult;
ICANTBELIEVEYOUREACTUALLYFILLINGOUTTHISFORM
Name; Shannon
Age; Old enough to
be here right now.
sex; No thank you.
Favorite-
color; Sunset
Number; 187
Animal; Humans
Food; Mexicans
book; Alice in Wonderland

Hobbies; Staring into the Distance, Acting when not on a stage, randomly bursting into song, Reading In the Shower, Inventing new "worty dirds". (Dirty words)

Flaws; Too long to list.

What could you improve on?;
Everything but Reading Manga, and eating. Because i am the master of those particular arts.

Occupation; To defy expectations.

Where do you see yourself in five years?;
Remembering answering this question.

Sign your Name

SHANNON LAKE

 

Posted Nov 10, '11 at 9:20pm

Neef

Neef

86 posts

ATTENTION. I just reached 69 posts. This is the 70th. that is all.

 

Posted Nov 10, '11 at 9:26pm

Alexistigerspice

Alexistigerspice

649 posts

xCongratulations! I like your poetry, some are quirky but others are sensitive.x

 

Posted Nov 16, '11 at 9:54pm

Neef

Neef

86 posts

My English teacher made us take poetry notes today, so instead, i did something productive and wrote poetry. Here's a few.

The sun beats down,
On a barren ground,
yet brings warmth upon,
an open quiet pond.

Sometimes it Moves too quickly,
Sometimes, it drags by,
and Time seems to slow,
but some times, it will fly.

A four line Stanza is called a Quatrain.

A two line stanza is a couplet.

Even dull grey days,
will always end in a fiery blaze

I did learn something!
(yeah, That if you reset the browser, all your work is gone)

 

Posted Nov 16, '11 at 10:27pm

Neef

Neef

86 posts

You may build a wall,
a hundred-and-one feet tall,
that goes farther both ways,
than forever and a day,
between us two,
You may build this, it's true,
but i will never fail to reach you.

I don't go over,
I cant go under,
never will i go through,
but i can still get to you.

and it's because,
of your love.

I'm on your mind,
you can't escape it.
I'm in your heart,
I'll never break it.

That's why i'm always with you,
and why obstacles cannot stop me.
I could be a thousand miles away,
and still be around when you want me.

 

Posted Nov 16, '11 at 10:49pm

Neef

Neef

86 posts

It's like, no one reads my poems.
with no feed back it's kinda hard to tell.
Please! COMMENTS ARE APPRECIATED :P
I want to hear the voice of the people!
I don't want to think that i'm alone here, and that everyone else is off playing WOW.

 

Posted Nov 20, '11 at 3:27pm

Neef

Neef

86 posts

I once knew happiness,
when i knew you;
But then you were consumed,
and i was too.
Even now ,
I'm Gnawed on by Guilt,
and Swallowed by Sorrow.
The same today, as it will be tomorrow.
and Yet, the beast that eats me most, is Regret,
for reasons which i, will never forget.
and day after day, I am eaten away,
by the deamons i can scarcely keep at bay.

 

Posted Jan 28, '12 at 12:27am

Neef

Neef

86 posts

A shadowed ghost,
fills an emptied host,
and the darkest shade
comes from a voided grave.
---
sing me a song about love,
cause that's my favorite word,
Sing to me from above,
and i'll sing back what I've heard,
And you'll be the dove
like a faithful mocking bird.
---
I listen and pray,
that maybe one day,
I may be able stop you from crying.

I wish to help in some way,
To keep your troubles at bay,
but that would hurt you by lying.

But, I wish I could say,
Of within me the fray,
that simply stops me from trying.

 

Posted Jan 28, '12 at 12:33am

Neef

Neef

86 posts

I'm sorry, but there are some errors that went unnoticed when i originally posted them.They are as follows.

This line:
you'll be a dove
and me like a faithful mocking bird

and just cut out the middle section of the third poem.
it's supposed to go:

I listen and pray,
that maybe one day,
I may be able stop you from crying.

But, I wish I could say,
Of within me the fray,
that simply stops me from trying.

 
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