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Hello people,

This is my thread, Thanks to Icy for the encouragement, and I'll post poems here, and you guys can do whatever. I mean, like you don't have to say anything, but it'd be nice to be critiqued once in a while. Since I'll post whenever...
T.T

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Microsoft word Text Definitions That don't mean the same thing at all.

Bold-Courageous
Cut-Sip in line
Copy-Mimic
File-Organized papers
Link-From Zelda
Margin-A space
Paste-glue that should not be eaten
Pi-yummy pie
Pie chart-A chart about pie
Print-Not in cursive
Date-won't be going on one of these soon.

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The Rain drops,
making me,
have to stop,
and go ...see

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Hmm. Not a lot of people here i see.

Desolation.
Surrounding life is gone,
and the world deserted,
Madness
comes to mind
When I look around,
to see, absolutely no one.
A Desolate land,
Empty of everyone,
but me.
Left behind in the ruins,
of a former civilization,
What was once great,
is now dead and gone.
Animals are scarcely there,
And other people are a fantasy.
The hallucinations I have are Beautiful,
But i must be careful of reality,
For the threat of death is no dream.
And Alone is the price,
for survival
I must sacrifice
company.

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uh, lets see, new poem...


Reminded
When you thought of me,
you saw my face;
But, When I thought of you;
It didn't remind me of a special place.
No, not the place where we first met;
nor the place where I had to bet,
that you'd say yes.
Not where you held my hand,
nor the theme park Disney land,
where we took our kids,
when they were small.
And definitely, not the Mall,
where I introduced you,
to parents and all my friends...
and not the store at the Southwest end,
where we shared an snow cone.
you did not remind me,
of your car, when we first kissed,
or the Hotel where I first felt Bliss.
My thoughts toward you,
held no relation to,
The beautiful cathedral, where I said "I do."
No, none of those things came to my mind,
When I Thought of you.


(Looks like somebody's in denial...)

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It Came Through the back door
I left the back door open
And I thought something had got in
so when I finally shut the door tight
I knew I had predicted right
and the thing that creeped in that night
well, It put up a good fight.
I killed it Through and through
when I squashed it up with my gigantic boot,
Stomped and kicked,
That's what i did.
And It limped as it crawled,
With only 15 legs left in all.
That's a mighty thing that I achieved,
When I fought the dangerous Centipede.

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Airplane Sickness
As I looked out,
and saw the sky,
I thought I loved,
To fly this high,
But then I looked down,
And saw the ground,
and as my world
Started to spin,
I thought: never again,
will I fly,
without a doggie bag by my side.

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My one goal on this site was to have regulars. I think I'm awesome now. My life is complete.

Hahahaha. I think you should try into in some poem comps.
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Loading...
Please Wait...

"What??
I don't want to wait any more!!!
Stupid thing,
Why won't you load?
I've been waiting,
for over an hour!
For a page to load!"
I refresh the page.
Notice: Unable to connect to the internet.
Please wait until you are
properly connected to the network
before refreshing the page.

I re-hook up the internet,
and refresh the page.
You are still not connected.
I check the plug to the router.
Unplugged...
If i plug it in,
will i still be disconnected?
I go sit back down,
The plug is plugged in,
and I have internet.
I refresh the page.
404 ERROR PAGE CANNOT BE FOUND.
I proceed to go insane.
(Screams)

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I haven't been on in a while... Hmm. That's cuse the internet got turned off... TT.TT sad face. . I had a good one for you guys, but i forgot to bring it. So i think ill do a hiaku.

A closed heart and a
Closed mind could even make a
Normal person blind.

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I'm Better off,
on my own,
cuse it's just my fate,
that i'd be alone.


I'll fall in love one day;
always going out of my way,
to keep them from harm and pain;
If only just to remain,
Sane

Love;
is a dangerous game to play;
You can't survive,
without it by your side;
and with it, you can't live,
Dying, just to give,
your heart away.

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Entry form for the secret cult;
ICANTBELIEVEYOUREACTUALLYFILLINGOUTTHISFORM
Name; Shannon
Age; Old enough to
be here right now.
sex; No thank you.
Favorite-
color; Sunset
Number; 187
Animal; Humans
Food; Mexicans
book; Alice in Wonderland

Hobbies; Staring into the Distance, Acting when not on a stage, randomly bursting into song, Reading In the Shower, Inventing new "worty dirds". (Dirty words)

Flaws; Too long to list.

What could you improve on?;
Everything but Reading Manga, and eating. Because i am the master of those particular arts.

Occupation; To defy expectations.

Where do you see yourself in five years?;
Remembering answering this question.


Sign your Name

SHANNON LAKE

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ATTENTION. I just reached 69 posts. This is the 70th. that is all.

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xCongratulations! I like your poetry, some are quirky but others are sensitive.x

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My English teacher made us take poetry notes today, so instead, i did something productive and wrote poetry. Here's a few.


The sun beats down,
On a barren ground,
yet brings warmth upon,
an open quiet pond.

Sometimes it Moves too quickly,
Sometimes, it drags by,
and Time seems to slow,
but some times, it will fly.

A four line Stanza is called a Quatrain.

A two line stanza is a couplet.

Even dull grey days,
will always end in a fiery blaze

I did learn something!
(yeah, That if you reset the browser, all your work is gone)

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You may build a wall,
a hundred-and-one feet tall,
that goes farther both ways,
than forever and a day,
between us two,
You may build this, it's true,
but i will never fail to reach you.

I don't go over,
I cant go under,
never will i go through,
but i can still get to you.

and it's because,
of your love.

I'm on your mind,
you can't escape it.
I'm in your heart,
I'll never break it.

That's why i'm always with you,
and why obstacles cannot stop me.
I could be a thousand miles away,
and still be around when you want me.

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