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Posted Mar 30, '11 at 5:35pm
sasquatchcarrot
144 posts
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uh ya... pretty good, ya.. hmm, ya uhh.. uhh, ya... NEEDS MORE COWBELL!!! or at least have like an audio were a sweet little old grandmamer is reading the poems, still good though. see you later sticky-tack.
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Posted Mar 30, '11 at 5:44pm
VastEvilness
25 posts
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These are pretty decent, Tacky.
The ending on the last one was fine, the flow to it is great!
Stay writing, can't wait to see more from you.
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Posted Mar 30, '11 at 5:53pm
TackyCrazyTNT
1,351 posts
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Only decent????!?!?!111/1/1//??
Just kidding.
Thanks, for the feedback, VEvil! (That's what I'm going to call you from now on)
And Veggie, I will work on the cowbell. SNL hahaha.
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Posted Mar 30, '11 at 6:15pm
VastEvilness
25 posts
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VEvil! (That's what I'm going to call you from now on)
Alright, that's pretty great, has a nice ring to it.
I'm going to call you Crazy from now on. :D
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Posted Mar 30, '11 at 6:27pm
TackyCrazyTNT
1,351 posts
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Nope, sorry, name's Tacky.
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Posted Mar 30, '11 at 6:28pm
VastEvilness
25 posts
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Not for me, your name is Crazy, this is why you call me Evil. ;)
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Posted Mar 30, '11 at 6:30pm
TackyCrazyTNT
1,351 posts
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Then I'm not responding, because Crazy is not my name.
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Posted Mar 31, '11 at 6:27pm
TackyCrazyTNT
1,351 posts
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I think I'll make a haiku. Or perhaps a set, depending on my mood. :D
Waiting
I'm waiting here still,
Breathing in the icy air
Waiting all alone.
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Posted Mar 31, '11 at 9:26pm
jeol
3,341 posts
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I haven't had much experience with haikus, but this is pretty good.
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Posted Mar 31, '11 at 9:31pm
TackyCrazyTNT
1,351 posts
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Thanks, jeol! What do you think of the anger one?
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