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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

I decided I'd try and post some of my poems on here, since I liked the first line poem thread so much. I would really like some advice on how to improve. Thanks!

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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

I changed it, you butt. :/
Read into the next page.

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

lmfao.
You should be a regular in the Tanka, I'm determined to make it gain popularity

TackyCrazyTNT
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You should be a regular in the Tanka, I'm determined to make it gain popularity


And maybe I will. :P
SupaLegit
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Lulz, that's what friends are for silly :P

Moon, I'll work on my Tanka skills too (hm sounds... different)
and be regular too. Besides, I need to another type of style under my belt

TackyCrazyTNT
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That winky face makes me nervous, Supa. D:

SupaLegit
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Nomad

Hehe, don't be I can only be so harsh, no more no less.... I think I almost got my tanka down ;O

TackyCrazyTNT
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Woohoo. I will read it at some point today.

I'm starving so give me some food.
I'd eat cereal but I'm not in the mood,
Throw me some meat;
anything to eat,
Or I may act very crude.

SupaLegit
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I'm starving so give me some food.
I'd eat cereal but I'm not in the mood,
Throw me some meat;
anything to eat,
Or I may act very crude.

Sounds like me when I'm starving and can't find something to eat >;O
Great job on the portrayal of me! Lol
ManiacalMind
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Good work, Tacky.
Can't really fault you on anything.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Good work, Tacky.
Can't really fault you on anything.


Wooohooo!! ;D

Hmmm...should I write more limericks tommorrow or switch to something else? Decisions, decisions....
MoonFairy
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Shepherd

SupaLegit, please take the flirting elsewhere.
And whatever you feel like Tacky.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

SupaLegit, please take the flirting elsewhere.
And whatever you feel like Tacky.


Hahahaha, thanks, Moon.
I think I'll do one more day of Limericks. No more for today though. :P
TackyCrazyTNT
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Since I am exceedingly depressed that our thread got locked, I think I'll write a depressing limerick.

There once was a wonderful thread.
Even better than sliced bread
Then it got locked,
And I lost a sock,
And now I'm losing my head.

d_dude
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Since I am exceedingly depressed that our thread got locked, I think I'll write a depressing limerick.

There once was a wonderful thread.
Even better than sliced bread
Then it got locked,
And I lost a sock,
And now I'm losing my head.


RIP This thread is currently about:

July 1 2010 - April 3 2011

It will be greatly missed.
TackyCrazyTNT
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I know, right? :P
It should get some sort of award.

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