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Posted Jun 4, '11 at 9:22pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

Friendly
Laughing, playing, what
excitement is all around
just be sanely dumb.

I had a little syllable trouble in the last line - supposed to mean 'normally dumb.'

 

Posted Jun 4, '11 at 9:32pm

FloydTC

FloydTC

2,851 posts

Shoutout to Bruno

hes not bruno mars
hes peter gene hernandez
now you know the truth

 

Posted Jun 4, '11 at 11:39pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

^^

Even though not asked
your statement is much obliged
keep posting stranger.

 

Posted Jun 5, '11 at 1:30am

deathopper

deathopper

835 posts

I wait for mother
To give me the Ipad so
I can post my work.

By work I mean poems which I archive on the Ipad. Stop hogging it mom!

 

Posted Jun 6, '11 at 11:19am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Wow, people! Thanks for the haikus!

Love you all
Love brings the world up
Love makes the world go around
Love makes us better

 

Posted Jun 6, '11 at 7:18pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

And on the other hand...
Love can also kill
Love can crush society
Love makes us bitter

hmmm, yin and yang, 2 faces of a quarter...

Hate you all
Hate makes us stronger
Hate formed from our ignorance
Hate will kill us all

dahh, i like equality so to speak,(1 does not go without the other) not that im a bitter person, but should u tell me about love, ill tell u about hate...

 

Posted Jun 6, '11 at 7:21pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

and for the sake of equality

And on the other hand...
Hate can inspire
Hate can work for the better
Hate will push us on...

 

Posted Jun 7, '11 at 1:12am

slayguy8

slayguy8

510 posts

Love, so rewarding
Making us joyful; smile
Emotions shining.

:D that is my mood!!!!

 

Posted Jun 7, '11 at 1:22am

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

missing a syllable....

maybe "making us joyfully smile"

 

Posted Jun 7, '11 at 4:30pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Tanks, Endscape! I love the way you balance out my haikus with your own. That's what makes this little thread go 'round! :)

 
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