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Posted Jun 17, '11 at 10:52am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

Thanks for your contribution Koru7!

Water ripples
The wave keeps coming
trying to pull me under
but then, it just fades

Small Anger
Tiny fists of rage
miniature smiles of wrath
these small giants seethe

 

Posted Jun 17, '11 at 12:03pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

I feel like balancing things out :b

Calm Waters
The water stayed calm
When a child came to the lake
And threw a lil' stone.

Large and Lovable
He came about here
His amiability
showed past his large frame.

 

Posted Jun 17, '11 at 12:15pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

Ha, ha, are haikus all about balance?

Wintry curtain
The white curtain fell
one by one, the white flakes fell
but the faces rose

Miscellaneous

What oddities these
the constant drone of nonsense
incessant, random

Two by two they go
one up, one down, both forward
soon they'll reach the end

 

Posted Jun 17, '11 at 12:59pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

The water stayed calm
When a child came to the lake
And threw a lil' stone.

Just realized that didn't come out quite right. It should probably be 'But a child came to the lake'.

Ha, ha, are haikus all about balance?

Yes, actually. I would balance out yours, but I can't right now :/ Maybe later.

 

Posted Jun 17, '11 at 5:52pm

Koru7

Koru7

757 posts

It should probably be 'But a child came to the lake'.
It works with when too. I like it better because it seems like an abrupt ending when someone's mad. lol

chimes rattle quiet
Wind is a tiny whisper
like secret gossip

 

Posted Jun 17, '11 at 5:55pm

Koru7

Koru7

757 posts

that should be a quote

 

Posted Jun 17, '11 at 6:55pm

FloydTC

FloydTC

2,851 posts

does freakenstein know
what he got himself into
when he accepted?

 

Posted Jun 18, '11 at 4:53pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

I wrote a haiku for father's day.Here it is:

A great warrior
his battle's fought day to day
Faithfully, he wins

 

Posted Jun 18, '11 at 10:05pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

Strange Minds

President Carter
The young money democrat
Weezy F babyy.

 

Posted Jun 19, '11 at 2:49pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

Random

Adjective for Endscape
Prince of desultory talk
hmmm, I am hungry...

for some reason, i wanted to write about myself..... anddd that came up...

 
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