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Posted Jun 20, '11 at 1:11pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

As always, Endscape, your contributions are appreciated.

One day
One day I'll be rich
I'll have all the things I want
and I'll never work

not really, just saying.

 

Posted Jun 20, '11 at 1:26pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

It works with when too. I like it better because it seems like an abrupt ending when someone's mad. lol

Well, it sounded like 'even when a child came and threw a rock'. 'But' is more clear.

 

Posted Jun 20, '11 at 2:07pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

The Greatest Enemy

Tis not rare we meet,
This.... "man" who can ruin me..
Lives in my mirror

 

Posted Jun 20, '11 at 2:20pm

deathopper

deathopper

835 posts

I ask to my friend,
"What is the meaning of life?"
And I get nothing.

This haiku is about the shallow people in my life. Asking them a deep question will result into a terrified stare.

 

Posted Jun 20, '11 at 4:15pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Here's my contribution for now:

Happy Heart
Stare through the mirror
and see my heart shining through
that makes me happy!

 

Posted Jun 21, '11 at 11:27am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Trees
The way the trees sway
makes me start to imagine
that I'm all alone

And then I wake up
to realize where I am
not really alone

 

Posted Jun 21, '11 at 12:46pm

deathopper

deathopper

835 posts

The sun so bright shines.
Shines down the stagnant waters.
Blue becomes silver.

This is the first part of the tanka I posted in the tanka contest.

 

Posted Jun 22, '11 at 1:32am

Endscape

Endscape

1,144 posts

All has become bleak
Colors have died in my world
Layed way for sorrow.

 

Posted Jun 22, '11 at 11:18am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Oh my goodness, Endscape. That's so sad.

Water has come by
trying to cleanse the sadness
they will soon prevail.

 

Posted Jun 23, '11 at 10:28am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Two hours
For two whole long hours
I sit waiting for the end
the gray curtain falls

But then, I awake
the sun has risen, I live
My joy overflows

I thought this one up for today. It's rainy and gloomy. :(

Special friend
Our love is special
they can never tear us up
we hold together

I did this one for a close friend of mine.

 
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