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Posted Jun 24, '11 at 10:04pm

Koru7

Koru7

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Unnamed (Give it your own naming)

slow rain, dripping off,
green leaves bend slowly down,
rain showers coldly.

 

Posted Jun 25, '11 at 8:29am

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

Ghost
Sculking through the streets,
Drifting through time day by day
Just living to die.

 

Posted Jun 25, '11 at 4:22pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Your haikus are depressing, Endscape. But that's okay.

My life is happy
I smile just because I can
Life's never better.

 

Posted Jun 25, '11 at 4:45pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

Depressing? dark is one thing but depressing?
i personally cant go on forever portraying the brighter side of life, thats fine and dandy however, obviously, there's a darker side, that has to be seen aswell, pretty or not, pleasant or not, its all about balance.....


ADHERE to these 2;
Yin and Yang walk hand and hand,
Guide us through this life

 

Posted Jun 27, '11 at 5:44pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

I meant, Endscape, your haikus are dark. Is that better?

Take me to the rain
show me where the sun lies down
lay me somewhere safe

take me to the moon
show me where the stars all burn
put me somewhere safe

take me back to earth
show me where the moon comes up
I'll be somewhere safe

 

Posted Jun 27, '11 at 8:30pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

...significantly.

The sun breaks the clouds
as u break my composure.
How do u do this?

 

Posted Jun 28, '11 at 12:15am

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

The Beauty is the Beast?

Medusa, beauty
or beast? eyes that pierce all men,
vixian or horror?

i dont know if i conveyed the message well enough... did her turn men to stone because of incredible beauty or was she really, a monster...

 

Posted Jun 28, '11 at 3:28pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Continued wishing

I want to keep on
wishing for what I don't have
it would be better

I want to keep on
hoping the world will soon end
so I can start over.

P.S. Thank you for your haikus Endscape.

 

Posted Jun 28, '11 at 4:44pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

hoping the world will soon end
so I can start over.


......dont we all...
 

Posted Jun 28, '11 at 5:17pm

invisibleninjagirl

invisibleninjagirl

29 posts

Ahh, I'll give it a shot.

The World

We have no rights here,
Who are we to destroy it,
Our eternal home.

Not my best piece, but, it alright. You're really good, murasaki! And Endscape, your haikus are really descriptive and dark. I like 'em All of 'em.

 
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