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Posted Jul 14, '12 at 7:37pm

CheapCheep

CheapCheep

170 posts

Feels like Darktroop keeps winning. lol. :)

Hopelessness

No hope in living
There's no hope anymore.
I face hopelessness.

 

Posted Jul 14, '12 at 8:25pm

acmed

acmed

1,921 posts

Nature pushes love.
The breeze of matrimony,
Our wind of glory.

 

Posted Jul 14, '12 at 8:40pm

TheGodofTechno

TheGodofTechno

2 posts

I must say, I love Haikus. I hope to help out with this thread and post lots in time.

 

Posted Jul 14, '12 at 11:29pm

GhostOfMatrix

GhostOfMatrix

11,687 posts

Knight

May or may not post this in the haiku contest.

Roaming through the town,
blissful experiences.
Trapped in a dream haze.

Currently trying to change the whole thing to make it better.

Haikus are so restrictive.

 

Posted Jul 15, '12 at 9:29am

acmed

acmed

1,921 posts

Haikus are so restrictive.

Your mom is so restrictive.

If silence were gone,
The peace of earth will shatter.
Deaf to the weakness

 

Posted Jul 15, '12 at 2:16pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

Feels like Darktroop keeps winning. lol. :)

Murasaki tries hard not to pick favorites.

Acmed returns???

New theme: Change

These winds of change blow
trying to drag me away
hoping I'll fall down

But I will not move
nothing will stand in my way
I'll go on, the same

 

Posted Jul 16, '12 at 12:18am

GhostOfMatrix

GhostOfMatrix

11,687 posts

Knight

Nothing to do with the theme.

The canvas of life;
painting your alluring fate.
Unique artistry.

Spent some time trying to think of a word to replace alluring and a better third line, no luck.

Other second and third lines I had written:
your paint brush constructing plans / designing your destiny / dreaming about the future
Imagination / Artistic prowess

 

Posted Jul 16, '12 at 4:18pm

CheapCheep

CheapCheep

170 posts

Change

Everyday the same
It's time to try something new
Its time for a change.

 

Posted Jul 18, '12 at 10:04pm

VirtualLife

VirtualLife

257 posts

I'm bored and haiku is fun...so I'm going to give it a shot

Bombs fall far away
Our hands are covered in blood
Only we are to blame

I hear the tick tock
Father time is growing older
Taking us with him

Only you did the crime
And yet only I did the time
Now does that seem fair

We were not ever friends
We sit here as the world ends
Pretending we're friends

The gentle boom boom boom
Tells me that it is all over
I will wake up dead

 

Posted Jul 19, '12 at 8:20am

acmed

acmed

1,921 posts

Yes. I've returned after a long time of absence.

But WHOA! WHY ARE THERE THEMES! I THOUGHT THIS WAS A FREE COUNTRY!

Tadpole swims along,
Before the current drags him.
And hop he goes now

....

AMERICA

 
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