LOL haikus... my favorite type of poem... i remember i used to play an mmorpg called runescape and i only spoke in haikus XD
anyway here is one i just made up:
[b] THE MIGHTY DRAGON
High in the mountains,
A strong fearless dragon lives,
Heros defeated.
One more comes, oh wow!
Surely he can't beat the drake,
He must be stupid.
A slash and a punch,
Wow he has really done it!
He slayed the dragon...
hmm by reading some of your poems i can see i learnt it differently than you.
firsty... i learnt that you can put multiple haikus together and it is still a haiku ( like i did above) I am not saying you have to do it, but, 209+ times you have posted haikus in this thread and none were the way i wrote it.
secondly... i learnt that in every poem you have to put a comma at the end of the line and not a full stop.
please dont take those things as me saying your doing it all cause i dont mean that xd