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Posted Feb 26, '13 at 9:58am

Rapyion

Rapyion

2,052 posts

He Had No Time

The man was at work,
Working at a squeezed cubicle,
And not caring.

He did not have time,
Time to be with family,
He threw his life off.

 

Posted Feb 26, '13 at 8:31pm

killersup10

killersup10

2,782 posts

Empty streets covered
He was never really alone there
Broken down corners

 

Posted Mar 3, '13 at 1:39pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Choices
I decided this.
Don't even try to change me.
I can't go back.

You never told me,
all the things you should have said.
So, this is the end.

 

Posted Mar 4, '13 at 10:09pm

killersup10

killersup10

2,782 posts

If there was ever a time to have this locked. That would have been it. With those final words. :O

 

Posted Mar 5, '13 at 10:10pm

killersup10

killersup10

2,782 posts

Never forgotten
Back through broken memories
To the olden times

 

Posted Mar 9, '13 at 5:42pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

The Stranger
Who knows what he knows?
He's too close to understand.
People don't know him.

 

Posted Mar 9, '13 at 9:10pm

rustygooga

rustygooga

21 posts

LOL haikus... my favorite type of poem... i remember i used to play an mmorpg called runescape and i only spoke in haikus XD
anyway here is one i just made up:
[b] THE MIGHTY DRAGON
High in the mountains,
A strong fearless dragon lives,
Heros defeated.

One more comes, oh wow!
Surely he can't beat the drake,
He must be stupid.

A slash and a punch,
Wow he has really done it!
He slayed the dragon...


hmm by reading some of your poems i can see i learnt it differently than you.
firsty... i learnt that you can put multiple haikus together and it is still a haiku ( like i did above) I am not saying you have to do it, but, 209+ times you have posted haikus in this thread and none were the way i wrote it.

secondly... i learnt that in every poem you have to put a comma at the end of the line and not a full stop.

please dont take those things as me saying your doing it all cause i dont mean that xd

 

Posted Mar 17, '13 at 9:14am

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

6,861 posts

Fearless

Fearless, they all say.
I go out, and then they see.
Nothing. They were wrong.

 

Posted Apr 10, '13 at 7:02am

Rapyion

Rapyion

2,052 posts

NO, NO, NO.

Terrified

I do not need this,
Yet, I contained this feeling,
devouring me.

I was almost dead,
I was inflicted with fear,
That was not needed.

I can't let this thread,
Go to the wastelands of dust,
I cannot let it.

 

Posted Apr 11, '13 at 10:33pm

killersup10

killersup10

2,782 posts

Inside of a teen
There are so many worries
Floating in the head

 
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