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Haiku Land

Posted Feb 26, '13 at 8:31pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,578 posts

Empty streets covered
He was never really alone there
Broken down corners

 

Posted Mar 3, '13 at 1:39pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,327 posts

Choices
I decided this.
Don't even try to change me.
I can't go back.

You never told me,
all the things you should have said.
So, this is the end.

 

Posted Mar 4, '13 at 10:09pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,578 posts

If there was ever a time to have this locked. That would have been it. With those final words. :O

 

Posted Mar 5, '13 at 10:10pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,578 posts

Never forgotten
Back through broken memories
To the olden times

 

Posted Mar 9, '13 at 5:42pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,327 posts

The Stranger
Who knows what he knows?
He's too close to understand.
People don't know him.

 

Posted Mar 9, '13 at 9:10pm

rustygooga

rustygooga

14 posts

LOL haikus... my favorite type of poem... i remember i used to play an mmorpg called runescape and i only spoke in haikus XD
anyway here is one i just made up:
[b] THE MIGHTY DRAGON
High in the mountains,
A strong fearless dragon lives,
Heros defeated.

One more comes, oh wow!
Surely he can't beat the drake,
He must be stupid.

A slash and a punch,
Wow he has really done it!
He slayed the dragon...

hmm by reading some of your poems i can see i learnt it differently than you.
firsty... i learnt that you can put multiple haikus together and it is still a haiku ( like i did above) I am not saying you have to do it, but, 209+ times you have posted haikus in this thread and none were the way i wrote it.

secondly... i learnt that in every poem you have to put a comma at the end of the line and not a full stop.

please dont take those things as me saying your doing it all cause i dont mean that xd

 

Posted Mar 17, '13 at 9:14am

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

1,647 posts

Fearless

Fearless, they all say.
I go out, and then they see.
Nothing. They were wrong.

 

Posted Apr 10, '13 at 7:02am

Rapyion

Rapyion

421 posts

NO, NO, NO.

Terrified

I do not need this,
Yet, I contained this feeling,
devouring me.

I was almost dead,
I was inflicted with fear,
That was not needed.

I can't let this thread,
Go to the wastelands of dust,
I cannot let it.

 

Posted Apr 11, '13 at 10:33pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,578 posts

Inside of a teen
There are so many worries
Floating in the head

 

Posted Apr 14, '13 at 9:14pm

Kiwi05

Kiwi05

2 posts

Her heart was broken
But more; Her soul was yearning
For something deadly

They say, she was sweet
They say she always looked fine
They say, they were wrong

Her life, her own death
All her pain and worries were gone
She took her last breath

She was wearing white
Patterned with a maroon red
Maroon red as blood

Her eyes looking to
The blue heavens in the sky
The pain, has passed by.

 
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