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Posted May 11, '13 at 12:08pm

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

3,336 posts

Why fear the darkness?
It is what defines the light
It's equality

 

Posted May 11, '13 at 9:50pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,788 posts

To trust once again
Should time be wasted on you
To devote the love

 

Posted May 12, '13 at 1:10pm

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

3,336 posts

You are wasted life
Like a desert near water
But a rainstorm comes

 

Posted May 17, '13 at 6:37am

killersup10

killersup10

1,788 posts

Love comes flooding back
Drowning your heart , no air here
Become ingulfed

 

Posted May 18, '13 at 7:42pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

Abandoned, alone.
His sad reality looms.
Where will he go now?

 

Posted May 18, '13 at 7:46pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

If there was ever a time to have this locked. That would have been it. With those final words. :O

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Either way, I'm flattered.

hmm by reading some of your poems i can see i learnt it differently than you.
firsty... i learnt that you can put multiple haikus together and it is still a haiku ( like i did above) I am not saying you have to do it, but, 209+ times you have posted haikus in this thread and none were the way i wrote it.

I have posted haikus more than one at a time. It's just waay easier to just write one and be done with it. When I have more time I usually post two or more. But the whole purpose of this thread is to allow people to freelance haikus. Just have fun and take it outside of the traditional format, you know, nature and stuff. XD Anyway, glad to see you here. Hope you have fun! Post often!

 

Posted May 19, '13 at 12:42am

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

3,336 posts

A Deceiving Look
I see a kind man
Yet his eyes are blood thirsty
A killer instinct

Fearless
So invincible
This man, unfazed by danger
No fear in his eyes

Cold Smile
A cold heart inside
Her body is frostbitten
Yet she is smiling

 

Posted May 19, '13 at 8:25pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,788 posts

love will kill your mind
Hearts will bleed freely tonight
Old broken fool's house

 

Posted May 19, '13 at 10:51pm

SectoidMedic

SectoidMedic

192 posts

Ah Gordon Freeman
such a violent person
but still so silent

 

Posted May 20, '13 at 12:34am

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

3,336 posts

A brooding feeling
What is this uncertainty?
Now, destruction looms

 
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