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Posted Apr 29, '11 at 5:49pm
murasaki9
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Jeez! Ernie15, thank you for pointing that out! How could I make such a mistake!? I guess I just couldn't make up my mind whether I wanted 'us' or 'them' ha, ha! I meant 'us'. I didn't put the 'them' there on purpose.
I thought up another haiku:
Hold on
I know you are strong
Hold on one more moment now
The end will soon come.
By the way, Thank you for your haiku, master565.
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Posted Apr 30, '11 at 2:58am
Endscape
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.....
The end will soon come
to those who speak of his name
just call on Endscape
isnt their a thread in which u take the last line of wat was left by your predecessor and form a poem using it.... hmm.
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Posted Apr 30, '11 at 1:21pm
murasaki9
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I'm sorry, what?
No, this isn't a thread for taking the last line of what was left by the last person and forming a poem using it. The bold 'Hold on' is supposed to be the title. This is for thread is for contributing haikus.
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Posted Apr 30, '11 at 5:22pm
Maverick4
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isnt their a thread in which u take the last line of wat was left by your predecessor and form a poem using it....
May be you're thinking of 'First Line Poetry'?
https://ftp.armorgames.com/community/th … ry/page/97
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Posted Apr 30, '11 at 8:59pm
murasaki9
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Thanks Maverick! Yes, that is what Endscape is thinking of. And that's not what I'm doing here.Sorry if it came across that way.
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Posted May 1, '11 at 6:04am
Endscape
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I'm sorry, what?
No, this isn't a thread for taking the last line of what was left by the last person and forming a poem using it. The bold 'Hold on' is supposed to be the title. This is for thread is for contributing haikus.
already knew all of this.... i posted a few times on this already..... i took your last line murasaki which is why i made it in bold, and did not quote it because it would... off. Simply trying to give this thread some...... "umph" to keep it going..... anddd all though i wasnt looking for that thread thank u maverick for finding it.
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Posted May 1, '11 at 6:06am
Endscape
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because it would... off
meant to say *it would look off*
excuse the double post.
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Posted May 2, '11 at 2:14pm
murasaki9
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Thank you Endscape. Thank you for trying to keep my thread going.
That makes me feel better. I was a bit worried for a bit, because few people post on my threads. I guess I have to be more popular. But thank you for your thoughtfulness.
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Posted May 3, '11 at 1:25am
Endscape
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But minuscule in
his eyes, seems significant
to she, on-looking.
Significance
its fine.
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Posted May 6, '11 at 6:10pm
murasaki9
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Um, Endscape, what exactly are you trying to
say here? I don't get it.
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