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Posted May 6, '11 at 6:10pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Um, Endscape, what exactly are you trying to
say here? I don't get it.

 

Posted May 7, '11 at 8:19am

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

im saying that i reallllllly didnt think much of it, its pure and simple haiku thread right? i just want to keep it going so im throwing out ideas, so in my mind u thanked me for wat was nothing to me, so i made a haiku on that :)

 

Posted May 7, '11 at 2:30pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Wow, thanks Endscape. That's sweet of you. I have a haiku for that:

Some kind acts are done
In the blindness of the night
Which only some see

 

Posted May 8, '11 at 12:22pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

Some kind acts are done
In the blindness of the night
Which only some see


beautiful, great job..
 

Posted May 8, '11 at 6:58pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Thank you Endscape, as always, for your constructive
comments.

 

Posted May 9, '11 at 6:16pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Something random:

Sometime, we can hope
Sometimes, we can start to wish
Sometimes, we can do

 

Posted May 10, '11 at 3:21pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

Sometimes is Excluded

Sometimes, we can not
Sometimes, succede in this life
Sometimes, without trials.


read all but "sometimes" as one sentence...

 

Posted May 11, '11 at 7:01pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Sometimes, It's wonderful

Sometimes, it's so good
Sometimes, it's so wonderful
To have friends who -------.

I couldn't decide what one syllable word I should put at the end. I couldn't decided what word best fit the last sentence.

 

Posted May 12, '11 at 3:11am

Efan

Efan

3,162 posts

I couldn't decide what one syllable word I should put at the end. I couldn't decided what word best fit the last sentence.

Care. A simple word, but it fits, I think.
I'll post a hiaku later. mebe today, mebe never.
 

Posted May 12, '11 at 3:14am

Masterforger

Masterforger

1,856 posts

Secrets

I should not be known
If i am told i wont stay
And you wont have me

 
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