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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Koru7
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I know this is offtopic but, why did murasaki close her comments?

here's a haiku

As I take my pen
from the ink bottle it drips
marks my parchment black.

EmperorPalpatine
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I know this is offtopic but, why did murasaki close her comments?


Can't give an answer,
Maybe it was spammed too much,
I don't really know.
idontsuckthatmuch
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I made a haiku,
About making a haiku.
So there you have it.

idontsuckthatmuch
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not very unique,
not original at all,
but there you have it...


But my haiku is completely original/unique.

/sarcasm

I wasn't going for originality on that one. I just wanted to make a haiku.
EmperorPalpatine
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Using sarcasm
Is not very nice at all
Please avoid its use.

Hullabaloo
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Because asking on
The internet politely
Would solve anything

/sarcasm

Ernie15
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Bard

Sarcasm ain't bad
Unless you are the victim.
Then it's just funny

deathopper
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Pain is like a coin,
Both have two different sides.
I have said enough.

deathopper
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pain- feeling of discomfort, agony, alert that the body is being harmed, can this be the up side to which you reffered.


What I meant was that one side of the &quotain coin" is that those watching it find it hilarious ("Did he just smash his nuts on the railing?! Hahahahah!&quot and the other is the felling of pain ("Aaaaaaaaoooooou!&quot.
destruction101
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As the wind does blow

Across the trees, I see the

Buds blooming in May

destruction101
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Falling to the ground,

I watch a leaf settle down

In a bed of brown.

destruction101
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hai·kuâ â/Ëhaɪku/ Show Spelled
[hahy-koo] Show IPA

â"noun, plural -ku for 2.
1. a major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.
2. a poem written in this form.

murasaki9
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Thank you, guys, sooo much for keeping my thread alive!! Thank you!
I'm so upset because while I was gone, most of my other threads fell.
But this one...

Thank you.
I thank you so much
for keeping me so alive
this is my small thanks.

murasaki9
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I didn't enjoy that colloquy on page 17.
I'm just saying.

EmperorPalpatine
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We're filled with regret.
If we have offended you,
We apologise.

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