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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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destruction101
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As the wind does blow

Across the trees, I see the

Buds blooming in May

destruction101
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Falling to the ground,

I watch a leaf settle down

In a bed of brown.

destruction101
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hai·kuâ â/Ëhaɪku/ Show Spelled
[hahy-koo] Show IPA

â"noun, plural -ku for 2.
1. a major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.
2. a poem written in this form.

murasaki9
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Thank you, guys, sooo much for keeping my thread alive!! Thank you!
I'm so upset because while I was gone, most of my other threads fell.
But this one...

Thank you.
I thank you so much
for keeping me so alive
this is my small thanks.

murasaki9
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I didn't enjoy that colloquy on page 17.
I'm just saying.

EmperorPalpatine
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We're filled with regret.
If we have offended you,
We apologise.

CalvinKidd137
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Watch the animal.
It is not dead, I hope
It is very nice.

EmperorPalpatine
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You regret nothing?
I'll bet your parents are proud
Of their haughty kid.

murasaki9
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Very well, I say
maybe another topic
is now in order!

Ha, ha!

Let the leaves fall down
And I will watch the sun set
as the wind blows by

murasaki9
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Let us hope for now
that everything is fine
so we can live life

jaza_m
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LET THEM FLY AWAY
SAY FAREWELL, GOODBYE FOR NOW
AWAY; THEY WILL FLY

I worked on it all day specifically for this thread. Thank you for your time.

murasaki9
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Thank you Jaza_m for this dedicated work!
I really appreciated it when people
are so dedicated!

This haiku land here
has grown to a victory
worth singing about!

murasaki9
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To each his own, now
let him form his own thoughts now
let him choose his doom

On the brighter side!

Water ripples by
Leaves float down, the wind whispers
my secrets are safe.

EmperorPalpatine
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Going for the gold,
Oops, trip, falling to the ground,
Darn! Last place again!

murasaki9
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Can I help it now
if everything will break
does it matter though

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