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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Funny, funny thing
I'm on my Wii writing this
my comp is broken

murasaki9
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Hey, people! Please do contribute here if you wish!
I'm dying to see more haikus!

EmperorPalpatine
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I've noticed a change:
You've altered your armatar!
It looks very nice.

EmperorPalpatine
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Tears flow like a stream
Down to the dry ground below,
When will the pain end?

murasaki9
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Thank you Emperor!

I wish this thread luck
for it grows ever so slow
but I won't give up

acmed
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Peasant

Would you hurt someone?
Even if you know Jesus
Is upon your soul?

EmperorPalpatine
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Where is the remorse?
Has emotion left us all?
Where has kindness gone?

acmed
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Up upon the ground.
Never know how high it is,
Until....... You spit down.

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jeol
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Herald

Upon this very
Place that I stand, high above,
The view is cloudy.

acmed
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Peasant

Haters Gonna Hate.
Can you do me a favor,
Not be one of them.

jeol
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Herald

Out of the misty
Haze he ran, stopping only
to admire the view.

The bright blue petals,
Gleaming brilliantly throughout
the land surrounding.

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Farmer

I stand before you.
I an attempt to feel whole,
I'll give you my soul.

Sorry it's pretty suckish.

acmed
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Peasant

It's a dead man's call.
Shall live to become evil?
Or die a hero?

murasaki9
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Wow, people! I'm getting some great contributions here!

What we do not know
can not come near and hurt us
or so they all say

acmed
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Wow, people! I'm getting some great contributions here!


Haiku is my favorite form of poetry. Thanks for the thread!

A rose has its thorns.
Each system has a virus.
Hearts, must be broken.
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