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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Haiku is my favorite form of poetry. Thanks for the thread

I didn't know that! You should post here more often! Thanks Acmed!

Joy is mine to have
love is mine to give away
grief, not to be had
murasaki9
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Tireless they are
to squeeze the lie out of me
they will not succeed

acmed
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You should post here more often!


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Look me in the eye.
Don't turn away, it's too late.
I just fell in love.
acmed
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Sorry for DP, but I had an Image Fail.

You should post here more often!


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dair5
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Ok, try two.

I can't hold my mind.
Just let the thoughts flow, please stop!
I'm out of control.

That was the best I could come up with. I need help.

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Ahem. I am sorry to say this, but apparently, for a proper haiku, it has to at least hint at a season. i have researched this.

acmed
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Ahem. I am sorry to say this, but apparently, for a proper haiku, it has to at least hint at a season. i have researched this.


But not in Haiku land! We're just speaking our minds through poetry!

Black and White sorrow.
Here's the tools of creation.
Now color me in.
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Ahem. I am sorry to say this, but apparently, for a proper haiku, it has to at least hint at a season. i have researched this.

Who said we're proper? :P

So apparently,
We've been writing hiakus wrong
But who really cares?
acmed
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I don't care at all.
Just as long as we have fun,
We dominate Earth!

EmperorPalpatine
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The wind blows past me:
A torrent of swirling skies,
The storm is coming.

murasaki9
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But not in Haiku land! We're just speaking our minds through poetry!

Yay! Thank you Acmed! We're free in Haiku Land!

I am on Ebay
trying to price all my games
it's so tedious
acmed
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My eyes sting of light.
I should probably get off now.
Curse you internet!

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Strolling Armor Games;
Not much to do, except write
Some random haiku.

(beginning of Spring)

Oh the bright spring light,
Shining sunbeams of wonder
Lighten the dead land.

acmed
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Wind starts to pick up.
Storm approaching closely now.
Now blow me away.

dair5
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It wanted a meal.
Tried to resist for too long.
Let go and find bliss.

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