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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Endscape
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why thank u both so much, im glad u enjoyed my poems....


Shoutout to Bruno
Just like Bruno Mars
i do see beautiful girls
all over the world


heyyyyyy, i really wish i could add just 2 more syllables for that one XD,
ill make a better one soon.

murasaki9
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Thank you, Endscape! Please add more Haikus, I enjoy them! They're so creative!

Endscape
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creativity
proof that the mind is at work
is mine hard working?

for u, i will.

murasaki9
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Ahhh, Endscape, once again, you take the cake!

Dreaming
I'm dreaming of you
there's nothing that will stop me
from dreaming of you.

deathopper
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The soldier and the wound

Laying on the field
With blood dripping down my corps
I await sweat death.
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Just a side note here. I don't know why most of my poems/short stories are dark and depressing. I'm not like that at all in real life. Must be a phase or something. :P

murasaki9
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Thank you, Deathopper. And, about your phase, I love your poems nevertheless. Maybe its because I used to be like that. It's close to home, ya know?

jeol
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I decided to randomly write a haiku because that's how I randomly write poetry. :P

Wind
Wind is e'er blowing
Trees and plants bow in its wake
'till it leaves again

murasaki9
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Thanks Jeol for your contribution.
Here's my Haiku for the day.

Desire
I desire something
just beyond my grasp, so close
yet so far away.

murasaki9
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Just something that struck my mind.

No Reply
It's in the morning
that I wait for your reply
and I wait in vain

jeol
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Friendly
Laughing, playing, what
excitement is all around
just be sanely dumb.

I had a little syllable trouble in the last line - supposed to mean 'normally dumb.'

FloydTC
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Shoutout to Bruno


hes not bruno mars
hes peter gene hernandez
now you know the truth
Endscape
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^^

Even though not asked
your statement is much obliged
keep posting stranger.

deathopper
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I wait for mother
To give me the Ipad so
I can post my work.

By work I mean poems which I archive on the Ipad. Stop hogging it mom!

murasaki9
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Wow, people! Thanks for the haikus!

Love you all
Love brings the world up
Love makes the world go around
Love makes us better

Endscape
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And on the other hand...
Love can also kill
Love can crush society
Love makes us bitter

hmmm, yin and yang, 2 faces of a quarter...

Hate you all
Hate makes us stronger
Hate formed from our ignorance
Hate will kill us all

dahh, i like equality so to speak,(1 does not go without the other) not that im a bitter person, but should u tell me about love, ill tell u about hate...

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