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Posted Jun 20, '11 at 4:53pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

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Out of curiosity? Are you French? The Parnassians were a sect of French Poets I believe, so... Of course, today a arnassian' is just a fancy word for a poet, so I could be overthinking this...

 

Posted Jun 20, '11 at 7:42pm

jeol

jeol

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Out of curiosity? Are you French? The Parnassians were a sect of French Poets I believe, so... Of course, today a arnassian' is just a fancy word for a poet, so I could be overthinking this...

Uuh, prolly. I know I'm German, but I might have a tad bit of French in me, but I honestly don't know. I was looking through my thesaurus one day when I found the word arnassian'... I liked it.
 

Posted Jun 20, '11 at 7:57pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

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Thats cool. I'm German as well so... Just curious.

 

Posted Jun 29, '11 at 2:19pm

jeol

jeol

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Howdy.

I got bored and made a new character. I might use her once and a while. Hope you like her.

I considered going into more detail, but realized that some of her actions might not be AG-worthy. It's mostly violence, soo.... I'm trying to refrain from keeping her as dark as I'm imagining, but it's a little hard... She has a fighting style I haven't really seen before, so... Enjoy.

http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/8528/whiteyo.jpg

Her name is White. I know. Such a colorful name. She's intentionally non-colorful, the only white being her eyes and the sash-like thing across her ninja costume. I'm happy how it turned out, seeing as it's one of the first times I really tried to use the style (eyes, hair). The knife is intentionally backwards, that's her fighting style. Soo... Yeah. This is White. Hope you like.

 

Posted Jun 29, '11 at 10:15pm

jeol

jeol

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I've realized that today I've been using this more as a journal than anything... I guess it's a good practice anyways.

I'm feeling really random. Oh wait, I'm always like that. Anyhoo, I suddenly remembered that paragraph story thingy that I did a while ago and decided to see how much I could make it work. I guess I'll work a little bit with White, working with character development and writing skills and also writing paragraph stories. :P

Introductory of White - Paragraph story

White pushed open the doors to the highschool and walked the hallway. Another year, along with the same chatty people yet more idiots to deal with. Small and thin, she donned skin-tight dark denim jeans still holding the scent of the store they were bought from, a old, baggy black t-shirt, and a gray hooded sweatshirt to cover it up. Around a corner, her colorless face revealed itself around the corner followed by her dark black hair. Several large, stocky teen guys stood around a much smaller frame by a set of lockers. Great, she thought. Jerks are being jerks, as usual. She sighed. There was no chance she would survive her freshman year of highschool.

 

Posted Jun 30, '11 at 5:46pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

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I did'nt know skirts are ninja-attire.

 

Posted Jun 30, '11 at 8:12pm

jeol

jeol

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I did'nt know skirts are ninja-attire.

Ninjas can wear anything. That's why they're so sneaky. :P

I'll prolly do another sketch or two, change up the costume a bit. Yes, Dudeguy, she will probably still have a skirt. She loves skirts, especially long flowy ones.
 

Posted Jun 30, '11 at 11:19pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

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Can't imagine that's very stealthy.

 

Posted Aug 28, '11 at 9:39pm

jeol

jeol

3,987 posts

O.o

Well, if I'm still active / becoming active again, might as well bring this back up.

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Commoners (Submittion for the NC. August 21st)

How do heroes embark on their quests?
Are they always valiant men?
Or are they simple persons?
Are they common, like me?
Yet, heroes commit
To challenges,
And end as
Victors,
All.

Unbearable Emotions (Submittion for the 10DPC. August 28th)

Every day at my bed,
I lay and let the daily mem'ries settle;
There I rest and let emotions overcome.

As I lay there in the darkness,
I only fall in sorrow, there,
Thoughts of regret fill my mind,
'Till at last I cry myself asleep.

But in the night still, I wake;
The fears of my dreams set in,
And all that's left of me are my emotions,
shaking me, piercing me through the night,
'Till at last I can bear it no longer.

Out of fear and anticipation, I get up;
Seeking the lightswitch, I stumble;
Reaching the medicine cabinet, it opens,
As if wishing I were to partake of it's contents.

Reaching my trembling hand inside, I take
any bottles I can grab, and opening them,
I down every last pill that ever reached my hand.

Nevermore will I live, yet despite this loss,
I will never feel emotions again, those
Gripping, stealing, sleep-depriving thoughts;
They will never again reign in my heart.

Welcoming Death (Submittion for the HC. August 30th)

The sailor stepped up;
Off the rail he jumped, with glee,
Ocean welcoming.

The Lily (Submittion for the HC. August 16th)

A lily so bright,
Petals splayed like brilliant stars,
Thriving 'neath the sun.

.

Then some random haiku for the Haiku land.

Upon this very
Place that I stand, high above,
The view is cloudy.

Out of the misty
Haze he ran, stopping only
to admire the view.

The bright blue petals,
Gleaming brilliantly throughout
the land surrounding.

.

That'll be all for now.

 

Posted Aug 30, '11 at 9:33am

jeol

jeol

3,987 posts

Bragging Rights (Submittion for the NC. September 7th)

Not to brag, but I seem to be here,
At the top of the world, above
All you sick peasants below.
I, ruler of your world.
Just think of it! Hah!
Oh my luck! Here,
I am served,
content,
pleased.

Random Poeming, etc.

O'er the land,
O'er the seas,
Through the mighty forests;

On I traveled,
On I sailor'd,
Beyond the distant horizon.

Where to live,
Where to stay,
On the edge of the world I stand.

 
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