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Jeol: The Resuscitation

Posted Sep 1, '11 at 10:22pm

jeol

jeol

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Took a picture while painting the deck. Looks a little distorted, duno what to do about that :/

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/3255/paintiq.jpg

 

Posted Sep 3, '11 at 10:01pm

RikJimmy00

RikJimmy00

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this rythme is really good trying to reach a metaphor?

 

Posted Sep 4, '11 at 6:12pm

jeol

jeol

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this rythme is really good trying to reach a metaphor?

Which poem? I be confuused :/

Time for a meandering.

I just realized how many people around me were German, or closely related. Today, at my church, a Thai showed up. Now, I usually don't really feel worried about going up and talking to people, but I found I could not bring myself to go up and talk to her. Maybe it was me, maybe it was my friends who always think I am 'hitting' on girls when I talk to them... That's one of the reasons I almost never talk to girls in church. Whenever I go to my co-op, though, I can talk to pretty much anyone. That poses another problem, though - anyone in my co-op is German [or closely related, minus my Spanish teacher], and co-ops don't get visitors, not to mention the only visitors would be the co-op people's friends, who are GERMAN [or, again, closely related]. The only chance of non-German people coming in would be the teacher's friends, and it's not like we would become very good friends then :P

Really, in that case, the only chance I get of actually experiencing some cultural diversity is through this site. Seriously, though, I have gotten the chance to meet some very different crowds on here :P And then, of course, I could try to talk to the Thai if she shows up at church next Sunday... We shall see.
 

Posted Sep 29, '11 at 10:04pm

jeol

jeol

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Humm, I'm horrible at keeping this up. Time for some poetry.

Explorer, I

Travelling the far lands
I will explore the deep crevices
Everything, I will take note of,
nothing escapes my gaze.

Marching through these uncharted sands,
The desert is not quite inviting -
I shall move on to seek out more land and love
The gentle lay of the 'scape.

On I shall move, through realms uncharted.
Though sometimes bland and unexciting,
Lands are always different,
No matter where you may gape.

Explore with me this nature unimparted,
Let us set out to the grand vistas afar.
Out in the unknown, there is no dissent.
Come with me, escape to the uncharted.

Entry for the 10DPC, actually doing a poem, not to mention more than a week before the deadline One of the first I have worked hard at for a long time, and one of the best I have written, in my opinion.

'Clouds'

Floating blimps of white,
Suspended high in the sky;
Master calls them 'clouds'.

Wrote this while waiting for class to begin.

I think I'm back in my poetry mood, because I may be obsessing over writing again... I guess that's a good thing.

 

Posted Oct 2, '11 at 9:21pm

jeol

jeol

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Explorer, I

Travelling through the lands,
I will explore each deep crevice.
Everything I will take note of;
Nothing will escape my gaze.

Marching through these uncharted sands,
The desert is not quite so inviting -
I shall continue to seek out land and love,
Wandering the gentle lay of the 'scape.

On I shall move, through realms uncharted.
Though sometimes bland and unexciting,
Lands will be ever contrasting,
No matter where you may gape.

Explore with me this nature unimparted,
Let us set out to the grand vistas afar.
In the unknown, there is no dissent.
Come, escape with me to the uncharted.

Revised version. I always forget to reread my poems *rolleyes*

Now, for some new content...

Check the watch,
Stand alone,
Wait impatiently.
Don't worry, love,
I am coming,
Ev'ry minute I am closer.

Find a bench,
Sit under restive,
Sigh once again.
Don't be angry,
For I will be there,
And shall stay by your side.

 

Posted Oct 18, '11 at 9:22pm

jeol

jeol

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Soo, lately I've been getting into a bit of HTML5, which is kinda fun to work with. It makes me happy because I'm not actually using a picture or anything... But I'm still drawing. Still have a few things to work out, but here is the result of my work thus far:
http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/4103/logolds.jpg

 

Posted Oct 28, '11 at 6:41pm

jeol

jeol

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Redid the HTML5 thingy to work on one canvas. Can't figure out how to make a multi-color canvas though.
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3271/finishedj.jpg
I also made a whole webpage with HTML5/Js, still a work in progress, and if I showed you, I'd have to kill you.

jk.

I am dedicated to finishing this poem to submit to a lit mag by our co-op. I'm really bad at repeating words in poems, and it doesn't help there aren't really many synonyms...

Explorer, I

Travelling through the lands,
I will explore each deep crevice.
Everything I will take note of;
Nothing will escape my gaze.

Marching through these unmapped sands,
The desert is not quite so inviting -
I shall continue to seek out land and love,
Wandering the gentle lay of the 'scape.

On I shall move, through realms uncharted.
Though sometimes bland and unexciting,
Lands will be ever contrasting,
No matter where I may gape.

Explore with me this nature unimparted,
Let us set out to the grand vistas afar.
In the unknown, there is no dissent.
Come, escape with me to the uncharted.

Dreams

Dreams are unpredictable;
They produce hopes and fears,
The works of our imagination.
There's no way to hide
From the capricious nature of dreams.

Predictions, memories, oddities,
The mind seems to dwell on;
Some happened, some to be sung,
Some never to come to pass.

Nightmare freak of the mind,
Nowhere to hide from mr. Fear -
Only to pass with a deep breath.

Paradise for the craving mind;
Does not last, despite the soul's will.

Sporadic, uncontrollable dreams.

 

Posted Oct 29, '11 at 10:32am

jeol

jeol

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Snow

Snow is descending,
White crystals blowing,
Alighting on the frozen ground.

Each tiny flake drops,
Falling aside another
Soon enough, snow
Will blanket the grass.

One, two, three, four,
Too many flakes too count.
The blizzard will soon cover
Every inch of the ground.

Pure white, graceful snow,
Slowly drifting toward the ground;
Whether close or far away,
It blankets all beneath.

 

Posted Oct 29, '11 at 11:18am

jeol

jeol

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Some photos now. Took a while, one of the photos was too big to upload to IS, had to figure out how to resize it in Elements (a pain). Here you go!

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/7849/p1090330edited1.jpg
http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/7282/p1090331edited1.jpg

 

Posted Oct 30, '11 at 4:12pm

jeol

jeol

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I tots expected me to find inspiration to write a bunch of poems this afternoon... Didn't happen. Blah. I'll start writing anyways.

Sunlight

Sunlight, gleaming in the eye,
Bright, blinding light, gleaming.
Nothing artificial can duplicate
The majesty of the setting sun.

 
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