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Jeol: The Resuscitation

Posted Apr 28, '11 at 7:07pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

My Private Shore

My private shore,
laid away from all distractions,
the place that I call home.

Oh how much I abhor
all the frantic interactions
that the world lays in chrome.

Oh how I long to soar
away from all abstractions
and find such a wonderful tome.

How I long to find my private shore,
and settle in with gentle actions
to the place that is my home.

My first submission to the poetry contest.

 

Posted Apr 28, '11 at 8:59pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

2,594 posts

Jeez, you got a high vocab. Something about your rhyming makes me think that it's very easy for you.

And I would be honored if you comment on some of my rhymes. They are kind of in the middle of my thread.

 

Posted Apr 28, '11 at 9:22pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

Jeez, you got a high vocab. Something about your rhyming makes me think that it's very easy for you.

Oh, thanks. For some of the rhyming, I use a site called 'Rhyme Zone.' It's a little useful :)

 

Posted Apr 28, '11 at 9:24pm

master565

master565

3,874 posts

I use a site called 'Rhyme Zone.

I was just thinking there should be a website that does that.

 

Posted Apr 29, '11 at 9:35am

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

I was just thinking there should be a website that does that.

I actually got the suggestion from SupaLegit. He can be helpful sometimes.

 

Posted May 1, '11 at 2:13pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

'MoonFairy Sketch'

It finally cooperated and let me post this. Sorry that it took so long.

 

Posted May 1, '11 at 7:32pm

TackyCrazyTNT

TackyCrazyTNT

1,630 posts

Moar photos. Moooooaoaaaaar DX
I'm being demanding.
OOoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH take a picture of your piano! :D

 

Posted May 1, '11 at 9:27pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

OOoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH sounds good! Will do. Sometime. Probably. Yes. :D

 

Posted May 2, '11 at 12:00pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,230 posts

Really...?
Pink?
Do I look like someone that enjoys pink? And then the... and the wand... and the.... I'm not a regular little fairy.
It's like you don't even know me.... *goes and cries in a corner*

 

Posted May 2, '11 at 6:51pm

jeol

jeol

3,565 posts

'Piano 1'
'Piano 2'
'Piano 3'

Piano pictures. Whala.

 
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