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I need no introduction. Oh, wait, I guess that's a little late. As you may have guessed, this is the infamous Jeol's thread.

So this morning, I was on my way to the co-op I take classes at thinking about my speech, when out of the blue comes a story. About a land named Rhyme. So, in the class I made my speech in after my speech, I started to work on one of my first poems that wasn't inspired by the 'First Line Poetry' thread, a quatrain.

Rhymes of Rhyme - a quatrain.
Once upon a time,
in the land of Rhyme,
rhyming was so prime,
it sparked such a fine time.

There was a man named Pine
in the land of Rhyme
who rhymed so prime,
it made ev'rybody cry.

When the man died,
it made the country dry
for the prime of their rhymes,
and the rhymes lost their shine.

In times since then,
in the land of Rhyme,
rhyming was so bland,
no one ever rhymed again.

Yes, the non-rhyming of the last stanza was intentional. Yes.

I will post other creations and whatnot in the future.

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Dang jeol.
I like that picture, but if you could color spalsh it, that would be kick arse.

And I love your tributes. They came from the heart. *puts fist over heart*

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Dang jeol.
I like that picture, but if you could color spalsh it, that would be kick arse.

Wow, that sounds like a really good idea, I'll try that. I used to be a signature artist, and once used something that looked like paint splashes on the background and the avatar as the Crysis guy. It looked pretty cool. If I can find it, I'll post it.
And I love your tributes. They came from the heart. *puts fist over heart*

Oh, thanks. I didn't like them at all on the poetry side, but tried my best to make it as jokish as possible. I love my beanie cap and hipster glasses
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@Moon
Agreed.

And jeol, I do love those hipster glasses of yours.
I like how much heartfelt emotion you put into these.

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I dunno if I ever shared this one... 'Lonely Road'
I will continue to look for the color splash one...

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Meh, can't seem to find it anywhere. Oh well.

Piece of bark I found on the sidewalk:'Bark'

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Some roses next to my house: 'Roses'

Now that my last concert is over, I will focus on writing and drawing and editing.

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My first pixel art. Sorry, it's so small, I didn't realize that pixels were like that...
http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/8449/pixel1.jpg

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I love your photography.
Especially 'Roses'. They're so pristine and still.

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Hehe, more flowers for ya - 'Black-eyed Susans'

Right now I'm working on some pixel art of a flower.

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For those of you who celebrate Easter, and also for those of you who don't, here is the official first drawing of Jeol the Bunneh.

A closer look at Jeol the Bunneh. But don't get too close, he'll Kung Fu you.

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Moar flower photos! DX
We want moar!
Seriously though, you are a great photographer.

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Those flowers look pretty great.
Is the Jeol bunny an Easter tribute?

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Those flowers look pretty great.
Is the Jeol bunny an Easter tribute?


Read the sticky 'adventures of AG.'
Jeol the Bunneh be a character.
LivingToDie
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Ah, you and Moon are writing a story?
Bunny character.

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Moar flower photos! DX
We want moar!

I will try my hardest to scrounge up another flower or two.
Jeol the Bunneh be a character.

Yeah, the chubby one is mine.
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