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I need no introduction. Oh, wait, I guess that's a little late. As you may have guessed, this is the infamous Jeol's thread.

So this morning, I was on my way to the co-op I take classes at thinking about my speech, when out of the blue comes a story. About a land named Rhyme. So, in the class I made my speech in after my speech, I started to work on one of my first poems that wasn't inspired by the 'First Line Poetry' thread, a quatrain.

Rhymes of Rhyme - a quatrain.
Once upon a time,
in the land of Rhyme,
rhyming was so prime,
it sparked such a fine time.

There was a man named Pine
in the land of Rhyme
who rhymed so prime,
it made ev'rybody cry.

When the man died,
it made the country dry
for the prime of their rhymes,
and the rhymes lost their shine.

In times since then,
in the land of Rhyme,
rhyming was so bland,
no one ever rhymed again.

Yes, the non-rhyming of the last stanza was intentional. Yes.

I will post other creations and whatnot in the future.

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Might as post one while waiting for the others to load: 'Yellow Flowers'

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Old Man Geguufa
'Blaberdaff,'
the old man said,
and shook him off
with a shake of his head.

Over all the years
that had come and gone,
why could anyone remember not?

Remember what, you ask?
the old man thought
and said, "the last of Ast!"


Dundundun....
Bit of a silly poem. Needed something to write. Two more parts.

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'More Flowers 8'

Enough flowers for you?

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'Cristalfox's Dragon'

Cristalfox wanted me to draw a white dragon for him. This was the result. Sorry for the typo in the title :/

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Flowerssss. 8D
I really like all of your photography. It looks quite professional.

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If anyone wants a character to be drawn, give me the details (animal, color, features, etc.) and I will make a quick sketch. I am also open to poetry topics. :P

'Butterfly'

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Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude.
You wanna draw my character?
Email me. Woot.

I really like that butterfly one, except for the big ole Devian watermark.... >,>


The flowers, I realllllyyyyy like the second one. I have no idea why.

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The flowers, I realllllyyyyy like the second one. I have no idea why.

Really? I like that one too!
You wanna draw my character?

I would love to. I'll just need some details. That's the only downside to fulfilling people's wishes... I'll email you.
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My Private Shore

My private shore,
laid away from all distractions,
the place that I call home.

Oh how much I abhor
all the frantic interactions
that the world lays in chrome.

Oh how I long to soar
away from all abstractions
and find such a wonderful tome.

How I long to find my private shore,
and settle in with gentle actions
to the place that is my home.

My first submission to the poetry contest.

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Jeez, you got a high vocab. Something about your rhyming makes me think that it's very easy for you.

And I would be honored if you comment on some of my rhymes. They are kind of in the middle of my thread.

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Jeez, you got a high vocab. Something about your rhyming makes me think that it's very easy for you.

Oh, thanks. For some of the rhyming, I use a site called 'Rhyme Zone.' It's a little useful
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I use a site called 'Rhyme Zone.


I was just thinking there should be a website that does that.
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I was just thinking there should be a website that does that.

I actually got the suggestion from SupaLegit. He can be helpful sometimes.
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'MoonFairy Sketch'

It finally cooperated and let me post this. Sorry that it took so long.

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