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I need no introduction. Oh, wait, I guess that's a little late. As you may have guessed, this is the infamous Jeol's thread.

So this morning, I was on my way to the co-op I take classes at thinking about my speech, when out of the blue comes a story. About a land named Rhyme. So, in the class I made my speech in after my speech, I started to work on one of my first poems that wasn't inspired by the 'First Line Poetry' thread, a quatrain.

Rhymes of Rhyme - a quatrain.
Once upon a time,
in the land of Rhyme,
rhyming was so prime,
it sparked such a fine time.

There was a man named Pine
in the land of Rhyme
who rhymed so prime,
it made ev'rybody cry.

When the man died,
it made the country dry
for the prime of their rhymes,
and the rhymes lost their shine.

In times since then,
in the land of Rhyme,
rhyming was so bland,
no one ever rhymed again.

Yes, the non-rhyming of the last stanza was intentional. Yes.

I will post other creations and whatnot in the future.

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TackyCrazyTNT
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Moar photos. Moooooaoaaaaar DX
I'm being demanding.
OOoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH take a picture of your piano!

jeol
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OOoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH sounds good! Will do. Sometime. Probably. Yes.

MoonFairy
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Really...?
Pink?
Do I look like someone that enjoys pink? And then the... and the wand... and the.... I'm not a regular little fairy.
It's like you don't even know me.... *goes and cries in a corner*

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'Piano 1'
'Piano 2'
'Piano 3'

Piano pictures. Whala.

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Really...?
Pink?
Do I look like someone that enjoys pink? And then the... and the wand... and the.... I'm not a regular little fairy.
It's like you don't even know me.... *goes and cries in a corner*

It's not pink. It's raspberry. And I'm sorry. Can you give me more specific details in an email?
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'Poor guy in the rain' Don't you feel sorry for him?

A little sloppy, wished I had a ruler. Note the guy's eyes. Yeah, they're blue.

MoonFairy
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I like the piano. But I hate the stupid water mark thing. Is that you playing the piano?

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I like the piano. But I hate the stupid water mark thing. Is that you playing the piano?

Yeah. I was playing some Debussy Awesome stuff.
MoonFairy
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Yeah. I was playing some Debussy Awesome stuff.

LKSJVNASJKDBCAKLSXJ,N LKACBKLJamS,;XL KAM,SDKJLFB
ARE YOU SERIOUS?!
You have probably the best music taste through all of AG besides Alt.
Well at least in my opinion.
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You have probably the best music taste through all of AG besides Alt.
Well at least in my opinion.

Really? Thanks! Backatya.

Rain - a poem
Gentle rain
pouring softly
pitter-pattering
on nature below.

Drops of rain
giving life
to all below
that crave life.

Pouring rain
gushing, splashing
flowing, sputtering
flooding all
in its path.

Flooding rain
gushing, filling
lakes of water
drowning all
who cross its path.

Blessed rain
dripping gently
giving life
and taking it back.
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Oh dear.

Sorry that this was a really busy weekend, but now that my co-op finished on Thursday, I finished my Am. History test, I had my last field trip, and totally finished school, I will try to jump into poetry and art as much as I can. I might be a little busy doing poetry and art for other people, possibly an acting job in some vids, some vacationing and conferencing in July, who knows what will happen. I'm honestly excited for summer and can't wait. I can tell you can't, either! While I lumber in summer vacation and public schoolers are still in school (trying my best not to brag), we must realize that summer begins on the exact same day for all of us, no matter what they say. I'm sure we're all excited for June 21st!

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I'm going to do my best to distract you while I get on course with art! My nephews were over for the past few days, and another day I was out picking up my brother from college, so it has been a depressing summer so far since I expected LOTS of time to be flowing forth. Sadly, it hasn't started like that. I am also writing a guide to HTML and CSS. Oops, did I say that out loud?

Here are a few things I made in Photoshop a few years ago:
http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/2381/blueflare.gif
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4606/bluu.gif
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/9227/coola.gif

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While you wait for some decent poetry and stuff, I will stall you with some Haiku from the contest they are holding:

Night Light - a Haiku

An arctic night light
Hanging above in the sky
what brilliant design

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I like the rain poem and pencil sketch. If you like doing that photoshop, i suggest you try Apophysis 2.02 out.

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I like the rain poem and pencil sketch. If you like doing that photoshop, i suggest you try Apophysis 2.02 out.

Thanks. Is the pencil sketch the guy in the rain one? I'll be sure to look up Apophysis. I don't do much with fractals, though, I mostly use gradients and pen designs. I love Photoshop.
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