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Does anyone like my poem?

Posted May 12, '08 at 5:07pm

SomeKidSoDealWithIt

SomeKidSoDealWithIt

121 posts

It's a free verse, so it doesn't rhyme.
Well, here it is:

Tempus Fugit

Time seems to fly
but you're only
remembering

And a memory
only lasts
for an instant

 

Posted May 12, '08 at 5:09pm

SomeKidSoDealWithIt

SomeKidSoDealWithIt

121 posts

Well I hope you like it.

 

Posted May 12, '08 at 5:21pm

ubertuna

ubertuna

2,262 posts

Knight

There's already a poetry thread, post your work there from now on

 

Posted May 12, '08 at 6:34pm

ace11ace11

ace11ace11

89 posts

its okay

 

Posted May 12, '08 at 6:36pm

squidlidink

squidlidink

506 posts

I like how you used the Latin expression Time Flies as your title.

 

Posted May 13, '08 at 10:32am

Strop

Strop

11,085 posts

Moderator

Wow, that was actually really thought provoking. Good job!

But yeah, totally what Ubertuna said. Makes the forums more organised!

 

Posted May 13, '08 at 10:34am

swordman

swordman

119 posts

not bad

 

Posted May 13, '08 at 9:54pm

snowman1474

snowman1474

240 posts

not bad, add on to it, and keep up the good work

~Snowman1474

 

Posted May 17, '08 at 4:51pm

nonconformist

nonconformist

1,177 posts

lol its...... descent.......... nah i cant do anything even close to that... Good job!!!

 

Posted May 17, '08 at 4:53pm

rob132

rob132

80 posts

pretty good

 
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