Community → Art, Music, and Writing
Posted May 12, '08 at 5:07pm
SomeKidSoDealWithIt
111 posts
It's a free verse, so it doesn't rhyme. Well, here it is:
Tempus Fugit
Time seems to fly but you're only remembering
And a memory only lasts for an instant
Posted May 12, '08 at 5:09pm
Well I hope you like it.
Posted May 12, '08 at 5:21pm
ubertuna
2,092 posts
There's already a poetry thread, post your work there from now on ;)
Posted May 12, '08 at 6:34pm
ace11ace11
89 posts
its okay
Posted May 12, '08 at 6:36pm
squidlidink
460 posts
I like how you used the Latin expression Time Flies as your title.
Posted May 13, '08 at 10:32am
Strop
10,635 posts
Moderator
Wow, that was actually really thought provoking. Good job!
But yeah, totally what Ubertuna said. Makes the forums more organised!
Posted May 13, '08 at 10:34am
swordman
119 posts
not bad
Posted May 13, '08 at 9:54pm
snowman1474
220 posts
not bad, add on to it, and keep up the good work :)
~Snowman1474
Posted May 17, '08 at 4:51pm
nonconformist
988 posts
lol its...... descent.......... :p nah i cant do anything even close to that... Good job!!!
Posted May 17, '08 at 4:53pm
rob132
79 posts
pretty good
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