ForumsArt, Music, and WritingDoes anyone like my poem?

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SomeKidSoDealWithIt
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Peasant

It's a free verse, so it doesn't rhyme.
Well, here it is:

Tempus Fugit

Time seems to fly
but you're only
remembering

And a memory
only lasts
for an instant

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SomeKidSoDealWithIt
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Peasant

Well I hope you like it.

ubertuna
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Farmer

There's already a poetry thread, post your work there from now on

ace11ace11
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ace11ace11
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Peasant

its okay

squidlidink
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Shepherd

I like how you used the Latin expression Time Flies as your title.

Strop
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Strop
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Herald

Wow, that was actually really thought provoking. Good job!

But yeah, totally what Ubertuna said. Makes the forums more organised!

swordman
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Peasant

not bad

snowman1474
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Shepherd

not bad, add on to it, and keep up the good work

~Snowman1474

nonconformist
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Peasant

lol its...... descent.......... nah i cant do anything even close to that... Good job!!!

rob132
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Peasant

pretty good

6862837
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6862837
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Peasant

pretty good could be longer

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