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A poem that I wrote for a girl....

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Posted May 13, '08 at 9:43pm

snowman1474

snowman1474

240 posts

You are so beautiful and wonderful in my eyes. I think of you everyday.
I can't possibly begin to describe my feelings to you in words, but heres
my best try at doing so.

I do not want this poem to go too deep.
It's premature, and love's too far away.
But there are things I feel the need to say
Rather than more days of silence keep.
I hope for you it's not too great a leap
To hear me talking to you in this way.
My fears sometimes my sentiments betray,
Telling me to put my thoughts to sleep.
Ever since we met I've thought of you
As something more than just a passing friend.
You seem so lovely, like a melody
That haunts me with the wisp of something true.
You haunt me still, and so I won't pretend:
I tell you this that you might think of me.


Like it? It was never given to her....

 

Posted May 14, '08 at 6:41pm

squidlidink

squidlidink

506 posts

give it to her.

 

Posted May 15, '08 at 10:49pm

dank

dank

1,045 posts

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