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Android - A poem

Posted May 15, '08 at 12:33am

DragonSoul

DragonSoul

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Android
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I am alone here in my wandering thoughts...
A hermitic pilgrim

Wondering what and when and why...
The design of me

Telling myself there is no fate...
It is a dream

Traverse not upon the soul of mortality
For thy heart beats not...

It throbs and sputters down to a negligible dogma...
Taken in by a vessel longing for subsistence

Festoon my soul or lack thereof...
For my deeds were written

My hand carved my own future...
Into the walls of a world without fate

It was not that I was evil
But I was not understood

 

Posted May 15, '08 at 12:54am

DragonSoul

DragonSoul

11 posts

This is a poem about a man looking back at his life, questioning whether it was all pre-determined... As for the change in style towards the middle, he enters an inner-monologue in an attempt to understand how people can use fate as an excuse for how their own actions have played out. In the end he decides that, it's better to not believe in fate if you can live your life fully that way. People may accuse him of being evil, for whatever reason, but they didn't understand it was all an attempt to open his eyes to what is behind his life.

He carves with everything, simply to prove that it is himself that is carving and not the souless embodiment of an android that did only as it was meant to do.

 

Posted May 16, '08 at 7:19pm

DragonSoul

DragonSoul

11 posts

I didn't specifically say it, but comments and criticisms are allowed.

 
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