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Posted Aug 17, '11 at 6:07pm

SparklingKnight

SparklingKnight

72 posts

This is my original poetry

 

Posted Aug 17, '11 at 7:17pm

iMogwai

iMogwai

1,754 posts

So far, so good.

But really, why don't you wait until you actually have something to post, then include it in the opening post? You'll only risk having your thread locked before you get a chance to share your poetry otherwise.

 

Posted Aug 18, '11 at 7:39am

SparklingKnight

SparklingKnight

72 posts

All the things I love

The beautiful sky
The birds that fly
The flowers that bloom
The bride and groom
The mountain tops
The farmers crops
Are All the things I love

I love to play
With my friends all day
I love to sing
Its a beautiful thing
I love to dance
Jump and Prance
These are all the things I love

I thought of this in two minutes is it good or bad?

 

Posted Aug 18, '11 at 9:38am

Darksaber

Darksaber

130 posts

i think there good;)

 

Posted Aug 18, '11 at 11:13am

iMogwai

iMogwai

1,754 posts

I agree, it's pretty neat. It's happy too, which is nice as well.

 

Posted Aug 18, '11 at 11:45am

visitlegend

visitlegend

401 posts

Thats a pretty neat poem.
Wow just wow almost made me cry again.

-Legend

 

Posted Aug 21, '11 at 5:50pm

SparklingKnight

SparklingKnight

72 posts

Childrens sadness

All the birds are flying
All the children are crying
They dont know why
But they try and try
To laugh and play
And stay happy all day
But when it comes to the night
They get a fright
So they have to cry
and stare at the fly
Thats sits on the wall
It makes them bawl
So all day long
they just cry
Why????

I know it is very bad

 

Posted Aug 22, '11 at 12:38pm

Darksaber

Darksaber

130 posts

that one is an ok one not the best

 
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